Not the most exciting exposition in all of literature, but moving us along to where more interesting things will happen.
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YAAAY!!!
First off; I like the new avatar. Second, you continue to draw Foxglove adorable! Third; Gadget's a cutie when she's drowsy. Fourth; what exactly is Chip eating!?
One critique: in the third panel, the chipmunks' far cheeks should've been drawn at least a little. Their faces look flat.
First off; I like the new avatar. Second, you continue to draw Foxglove adorable! Third; Gadget's a cutie when she's drowsy. Fourth; what exactly is Chip eating!?
One critique: in the third panel, the chipmunks' far cheeks should've been drawn at least a little. Their faces look flat.
thank you for your kind observations B -)-
I did more post-scanning editing than usual on some of these frames and was still appalled at how badly some of them came out anyway. Chip's head in the third panel is ALL wrong and the upper parts of both 'munks heads are wrong almost everywhere. I really need to practice more - but I mean for the future pages to be better.
Please don't hesitate to criticize - I need all the help I can get! So much is crooked and asymmetric which I can't seem to see until the picture is actually posted.
---Ray Jones---
I did more post-scanning editing than usual on some of these frames and was still appalled at how badly some of them came out anyway. Chip's head in the third panel is ALL wrong and the upper parts of both 'munks heads are wrong almost everywhere. I really need to practice more - but I mean for the future pages to be better.
Please don't hesitate to criticize - I need all the help I can get! So much is crooked and asymmetric which I can't seem to see until the picture is actually posted.
---Ray Jones---
Oh, almost overlooked your question! On the last page Jalapena served Monty a crouton hollowed out and filled with cheese, Gadget had the strawberry, Chip the mixed nut platter, Dale a hunk of chocolate with powdered chocolate dusting, Zipper an apple slice, and, of course, Foxglove a dish of bugs.
I can sympathize with her, spending a long weekend at work myself. Worked a double shift Fridaynight/Saturday morning then my regular evening shift last night and tonight. Repeat every weekend this month. She'll soon be in bed asleep, tho that will only be the beginning of this adventure!
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