Special
A Thursday Prompt story
© 2022 by Walter Reimer
Prompt: custom
“Good morning! Welcome to New You Spa – “
“Never mind that. I wish to make a complaint.”
“Oh? May I have your name?”
“Kelly Warren.”
“Hang on a moment, let me check the computer . . . ah. It says you were here yesterday.”
“That’s right.”
“And you ordered our Special.”
“Yes.”
“May I ask what your complaint is?”
“You don’t need to ask. Just look at me!”
“I honestly don’t see – “
“I’m a guy!”
“Really?”
“YES, dammit! I came in as a guy yesterday!”
“And it took you this long to notice?”
“ . . . “
“Look – may I call you Kelly? Thank you – look, Kelly, our special here at New You specifically says that the treatment will make a new person out of you – “
“Will it wear off?”
“Afraid not.”
“Can I get a refund?”
“Sorry. All sales are final. You signed the disclaimer and waiver of liability.”
“So I can’t sue you.”
“Sorry, no. Look, if it’s any consolation, ‘Kelly’ can be a girl’s name too. And you do make a very pretty doe.”
“What’ll I tell my wife? She’ll be back from her mother’s on Monday.”
“Hm. Well, maybe she might want a spa treatment.”
“Another ‘Special?’ Hmm, Pat can be a buck’s name too . . . “
end
A Thursday Prompt story
© 2022 by Walter Reimer
Prompt: custom
“Good morning! Welcome to New You Spa – “
“Never mind that. I wish to make a complaint.”
“Oh? May I have your name?”
“Kelly Warren.”
“Hang on a moment, let me check the computer . . . ah. It says you were here yesterday.”
“That’s right.”
“And you ordered our Special.”
“Yes.”
“May I ask what your complaint is?”
“You don’t need to ask. Just look at me!”
“I honestly don’t see – “
“I’m a guy!”
“Really?”
“YES, dammit! I came in as a guy yesterday!”
“And it took you this long to notice?”
“ . . . “
“Look – may I call you Kelly? Thank you – look, Kelly, our special here at New You specifically says that the treatment will make a new person out of you – “
“Will it wear off?”
“Afraid not.”
“Can I get a refund?”
“Sorry. All sales are final. You signed the disclaimer and waiver of liability.”
“So I can’t sue you.”
“Sorry, no. Look, if it’s any consolation, ‘Kelly’ can be a girl’s name too. And you do make a very pretty doe.”
“What’ll I tell my wife? She’ll be back from her mother’s on Monday.”
“Hm. Well, maybe she might want a spa treatment.”
“Another ‘Special?’ Hmm, Pat can be a buck’s name too . . . “
end
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 120 x 92px
File Size 32.2 kB
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It's hinted that this takes place the day after Kelly walked out of the spa, and it's implied that he took a spa day while his wife was away. And let's be fair, when you get a set of shiny new toys, you just have to try them out, don't you?
So after a night of naughty fun, he starts to think, "Maybe this wasn't such a good idea . . . "
So after a night of naughty fun, he starts to think, "Maybe this wasn't such a good idea . . . "
Yeah, I laughed at the “And it took you this long to notice?” bit, but just getting out of the door of the spa should have forced her to notice. For one thing what he wore in most likely wouldn't fit the new her on the way out (deities know I wouldn't be pleased with a new female form that happened to fit my current male outfit! )
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