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Username: hikitsunethefoxfire
Larger/Original Version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4785520
Type of Response wanted: Redlines mostly, i learn better visually
Artist's Comments: this is
in a sweater and scarf looking up. at what, im not sure, i'd say leaves but the leaves dont change in florida, so perhaps ducks migrating.
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zydala
Larger/Original Version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4785520
Type of Response wanted: Redlines mostly, i learn better visually
Artist's Comments: this is
in a sweater and scarf looking up. at what, im not sure, i'd say leaves but the leaves dont change in florida, so perhaps ducks migrating.~
zydala
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Dog (Other)
Size 983 x 1280px
File Size 104.8 kB
This looks pretty good. Except I see a little bit of Clothes details missing. It's still pretty cool.
http://i341.photobucket.com/albums/.....ow_sweater.jpg
http://i341.photobucket.com/albums/.....ow_sweater.jpg
Your head seems off from the neck. Or rather the neck seems too thin. Also, I can see the head outline you sketched out, but you didn't follow it. The end result is the eyes are just a bit too big. The jaw is also extending out too far on the side of the head we can't see. Based on what we can see from her open mouth, her jaw extends to her left eye.
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