You should set up a link to the full version cuz this is awesome

yes i will! once i finish it X3 im close though

This has a lot of great moments in it, I think the mixing currently is what's takin' away from it the most. I'd suggest turning down your hats a bit, especially when they're doing the quick 16ths. They quickly become the loudest thing in the track, and they have the least variation of everything that's going on at the time (Not that that's bad, it just shouldn't be the focus methinks.)

Great job tho, good to see how this one is coming along.

thanks for the comments. i realized the hats was a bit high and some of the instruments was a bit off so i'm going to post an other submission n put this in the scraps cause for some reason. i cant change the file. thank you again. its great to hear other people suggestions good or bad ^w^