This is the beginning of a short story I decided to work on not too long ago ... At the moment, I just want critiques and constructive criticisms so I can improve upon what I have and add more later. That and this is my first story submission! :3
If violence and language are seriously that much of a problem ... go ahead and stay away ...
If violence and language are seriously that much of a problem ... go ahead and stay away ...
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 14.7 kB
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