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It seems Bowser is testing his servant, Yoshi...Finally, A pic for
justinalfarozzzzz as promised within trade and getting there just before my holidays.Just as well, I've manage to draw Bowser from scratch, somewhat! As well I could do a bit of update when possible.
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Art Update Changes: Edited the text on speech bubbles by request. Bowser's finger's now made a bit bigger and one of feather machines also changed.
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Let me start out by saying this is really cute, and I would like to see more of it in the future. That being said, I have a few things to point out about this piece in particular.
• Misspelling “losers” aside, it sounds like there’s other people (prisoners) watching, but we don’t see them here. This scene would make more sense if Bowser was just referring to Yoshi as a singular “loser.”
• Yoshi isn’t really laughing. Sure, he looks like he’s trying to hold it in, but that just makes the thought bubble saying “Yoshi…can’t…stop…laughing!” contradict his expression. Either the dialogue should be changed to match his expression, or his mouth be wide open from laughing hysterically so it matches the dialogue.
Anyway, that’s just my two cents. I still love your style of Yoshi, and I believe you have the potential to improve.
• Misspelling “losers” aside, it sounds like there’s other people (prisoners) watching, but we don’t see them here. This scene would make more sense if Bowser was just referring to Yoshi as a singular “loser.”
• Yoshi isn’t really laughing. Sure, he looks like he’s trying to hold it in, but that just makes the thought bubble saying “Yoshi…can’t…stop…laughing!” contradict his expression. Either the dialogue should be changed to match his expression, or his mouth be wide open from laughing hysterically so it matches the dialogue.
Anyway, that’s just my two cents. I still love your style of Yoshi, and I believe you have the potential to improve.
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