Tiny Bunny's First Day of School
In which a man becomes a rabbit kid!
And goes on to school!
Indeed, this is... longer than it was supposed to, and as a result the ending is rushed a bit. Sorry.
And goes on to school!
Indeed, this is... longer than it was supposed to, and as a result the ending is rushed a bit. Sorry.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 41.2 kB
Tact? What's that?
I just read the whole thing on my phone only to have our internet come up at the very end x.x
A bit rushed at the end - I think a little bit of an aftermath could have helped, but I understand you've been working at this for days now ^^; Still, I like that ending, and I'm sure Peter will too in a few more days. He'll always be an adorable, young rabbit, what's not to love about that? Seems he realizes the possibilities =D
The obsession with the uniforms is quirky enough to be a fun little element. I like the casual approaches you took, as if these things happen all the time and everyone just has to roll with it.
I just read the whole thing on my phone only to have our internet come up at the very end x.x
A bit rushed at the end - I think a little bit of an aftermath could have helped, but I understand you've been working at this for days now ^^; Still, I like that ending, and I'm sure Peter will too in a few more days. He'll always be an adorable, young rabbit, what's not to love about that? Seems he realizes the possibilities =D
The obsession with the uniforms is quirky enough to be a fun little element. I like the casual approaches you took, as if these things happen all the time and everyone just has to roll with it.
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