LOMS 02: A Debt Should Be Repaid
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Obey Me fanfic. Characters (besides PC), most images/icons and most plot points are from the game.
Demon/Human, m/f, will probably be steamy at some point. These will be marked.
NPC Index if needed to sort through the pile of dudes. (Small spoiler)
Contains: Kidnapping, loss of personal freedoms, mental health issues and medication, some fantasy violence, food and drink, gambling
Part Two: Lana meets the other human exchange student, and regales him with stories about her interactions with Mammon and Levi. Things are definitely never boring around a family of demons.
So, we see how the story has been snipped here: a lot of scenes that were fully detailed in the previous fic are abridged via retelling to Solomon. I tried to include just enough detail to get the point across without weighing it down with650 pages of fanfic a slightly different version of what would effectively be the same situation as the last story.
Also, the text conversations are intended to be small snips between scene breaks to get a glimpse at some of the things that happen Lana's "downtime" from main plot events and also get to know each of the brothers, even if they aren't as heavily mentioned in the story as they were. I liked the concept, but it seems like it might be a bit jarring. I'm pot committed to the idea at this point, but I'll try to tweak it as I go.
Obey Me fanfic. Characters (besides PC), most images/icons and most plot points are from the game.
Demon/Human, m/f, will probably be steamy at some point. These will be marked.
NPC Index if needed to sort through the pile of dudes. (Small spoiler)
Contains: Kidnapping, loss of personal freedoms, mental health issues and medication, some fantasy violence, food and drink, gambling
Part Two: Lana meets the other human exchange student, and regales him with stories about her interactions with Mammon and Levi. Things are definitely never boring around a family of demons.
So, we see how the story has been snipped here: a lot of scenes that were fully detailed in the previous fic are abridged via retelling to Solomon. I tried to include just enough detail to get the point across without weighing it down with
Also, the text conversations are intended to be small snips between scene breaks to get a glimpse at some of the things that happen Lana's "downtime" from main plot events and also get to know each of the brothers, even if they aren't as heavily mentioned in the story as they were. I liked the concept, but it seems like it might be a bit jarring. I'm pot committed to the idea at this point, but I'll try to tweak it as I go.
Category Story / Fanart
Species Demon
Size 96 x 120px
File Size 834.3 kB
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Yeah, I’ve been cutting out huge swathes of plot to reference back to it - largely to trim down on the length, but also to re-focus the story on Lana and Solomon, as the two human exchange students. Not that I think Solomon needs a fair shake per se, but he is important in his own way. xD
More comingas soon as I spend too much time formatting text messages
More coming
It does periodically decide to move that and the pictures to random parts of the page and/or document, but it’s gotten better in recent years (sorta xD) There’s a selection under “view” where you can add a grid to the background to help with the arranging. I might be phasing it out for later chapters, though; I love the look, and it’s better than it used to be, but it still takes a while.
I found a website that generates text-message convos. It COULD do the trick? "iphonefaketext.com", I'm sure there's others. Generate your image, then embed it?
You could possibly work out a template in GIMP or Inkscape too (free alternatives to Photoshop and Illustrator).
You could possibly work out a template in GIMP or Inkscape too (free alternatives to Photoshop and Illustrator).
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