Was due yesterday, had some great critique advice in class. There are 2 versions, this is the first one that i spent more time on but unfortunately is not as successful as the 2nd version. You can see the other version in my gallery as well.

This is an illustration for the short story The Scarlet Ibis by James Hurst. Its a tragic story about 2 brothers, if you read it you'll understand the scene I'm portraying. :)