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Tryin' my luck at something more realistic c:
Here is a glamorous girl, ready for fame. ^^
Media: Sketching pencils (I honestly can't remember which Dx)
Here is a glamorous girl, ready for fame. ^^
Media: Sketching pencils (I honestly can't remember which Dx)
Category All / Human
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 400 x 590px
File Size 70.2 kB
Responding to your critique request...
Overall, the actual facial shape is pretty solid. :) You have a good knowledge of the forms, it's more a question of refinement and placement presently. Kudos in particular on remembering the existance of eye sockets--so many people forget that when they shade! Your textures are also very nicely communicated.
As surzsha mentioned above, the ear is definitely too low...but they pretty much hit all the points on that, so I won't repeat it. One thing I also notice, however, is that I think the shape of the right (from her perspective) eye is a bit off. (Eyes from any angle other than straight on are tricky!) Primarily, it looks too flat against the face. Try foreshortening it a tiiiiny bit more and having it curve out a bit more--remember, the eye is a sphere!
Hope this helped!
Overall, the actual facial shape is pretty solid. :) You have a good knowledge of the forms, it's more a question of refinement and placement presently. Kudos in particular on remembering the existance of eye sockets--so many people forget that when they shade! Your textures are also very nicely communicated.
As surzsha mentioned above, the ear is definitely too low...but they pretty much hit all the points on that, so I won't repeat it. One thing I also notice, however, is that I think the shape of the right (from her perspective) eye is a bit off. (Eyes from any angle other than straight on are tricky!) Primarily, it looks too flat against the face. Try foreshortening it a tiiiiny bit more and having it curve out a bit more--remember, the eye is a sphere!
Hope this helped!
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