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abash the devil

By devils,
posted 19 years ago Writer

a random poem basied off a line from the crow tell me what you think

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CrystalMendrilia ~crystalmendrilia

Digital Artist, (Bad at it :P)

18 years ago

I like the story but honestly, you need to twist the flow around a little, change words around. I don't feel the flow matching the words well at all. :(

devils ~devils

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18 years ago

dw it was a bit of an off day lol

CrystalMendrilia ~crystalmendrilia

Digital Artist, (Bad at it :P)

18 years ago

Ever consider rewriting out of curiosity? (I mean no offence with this question. I pissed off a poet once asking it which pissed me off heh. I started doing poetry before stories ya know.)

devils ~devils

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18 years ago

i have concidered it but i kinda have to waight for the inspirathion to hit me otherwise i'll just lose it all togeather

CrystalMendrilia ~crystalmendrilia

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18 years ago

^_^ I can relate.

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