I HAD, and repeat, HAD to do a rewrite for her. This was bound to happen. I mean, why not better what was already kick ass. Her original bio is here.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/40297466/?qo=8&q=by%3Ablackkusanagi+Moon&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
Name : Tsulyen
Alias : Moon, Bee.
Age : Aging has stopped at 23.
Hair Color : Black with Silver Stripes
Eye Color : A haunting grey.
Race : Formerly Ashruian (An amazon race which lives on a distant moon), Now Neigh Goddess (an inbetween a normal god and a high god).
Skin Color : Caucasian Yet slightly Tanned.
Height : 6' 9” (when normal)
Weight : 3.5 Tons (bone n muscle, when normal)
Family : Bai-Ten and Ling-Tse (Parents, Mothers), Mao (sister)
Occupation : Aurora‘s Assassin, Advisor, Goddess Of War, former Miss Athena (although she wont admit that she used a different moniker and dyed her hair and wore contacts and changed her ki to enter, if anything, shell try to skip the subject if brought up in conversation.)
Build : Incredibly muscled yet feminine ...
Personality : Tsulyen is actually quite odd when you look at her. Around Aurora and others shes very close to, she can be serious, but then shes known to sneak in a quip here and there, and is actually quite light hearted. Apparently being around others gave her more reason to defend others she held close to heart. Around others she doesn’t know, she can be very distant, and hard to figure out… And on the battlefield or when killing, she can be far more devastating than she was before.
Danger Level : Being Aurora‘s protégé did have its perks. Not only does Moon have abilities far greater than neigh gods, she has physical abilities rivaling high gods, and a physical ability that’s above Miyu, but no where near Rina. She was already a very skilled warrior in Shinsen Ninjutsu and Kenjutsu. But after gaining her extra powers and becoming the goddess of war, she also became a very great commander in battle, mastered not only her forms of fighting and assassination, but also gained more skills within other martial arts. Her warping skills have greatly increased in power, make her a far deadlier foe than she was before. Ranking her at N/A.
From the Ning-Fu province of the Ashurian people's moon, Tsulyen had been the elder daughter of Bai-Ten and Ling-Tse. With her parents being two of the stronger females in the tribe, Tsulyen had enjoyed the level of respect her family had for one another. But one faithful day, their tribe was under attack from raveous beasts, lead by an arch demon, Vent. Before things could reach their worst point, Bai-Ten put her in a capsule and smiled, tapping the screen lightly as she was shoved off into the lake, young Tsulyen was in one capsule while the other containing her younger sister was shoved off. Tired she took a nap and had reawoken to be alone...the capsule holding her younger sister Mao, had dissapeared.
Frantically screaming for help, the young 5 year old was crying as she burried her face in her ragged pants as her capsule had hit land. It was about 190 miles from her village, so when she was freed by a few resident warriors from another tribe, she looked backwards to see the small smoke pillar. The clan studied several martial art forms, and could see the supernatural abilities that this child possessed. But before she knew it, she had reached the age of 14, and had mastered the arts they had for her. Once upon leaving the village, Tsu had begun her journey twards her old village, when Vent stood before her, a demonic smile on his face. Knowing instantly who he was, she screamed in a fury as she began to attack him in a violent fashion. Her skills were great...her power unbridled...sadly, it wasnt enough.
She was downed 2 minutes after she begun attacking. She had reawoken about 6 days later, looking about, confused. She had no memory of who she was... all she knew was how to fight. As she headed back into that village, the people were no longer there, but one was there taking care of the souls still rampant. Aurora. Not knowing why she was there, she didnt speak, but came right a the high goddess expecting to defeat her, but instead was nearly killed in 4 blows. Aurora looking her and judging her, she smiled saying, "Child...you may not know your name...but you will be my blade...arise...so I may give you a name." Complying with the one who defeated her, she stood slowly. Aurora spoke lightly, "As cold and as silent as the night of a full moon...your name shall be Moon... You will be my student...and with luck, youll find out more than you bargained for." Moon simply complied with, "Yes my leige...." That was a few months ago. She had grown in her goddess abilities over time, learning new skills, and wielding a blade Aurora had created from a native metal from Moon's home, called "Maiden" that she uses in her missions.
````` (Now for the update on her.)
Tsulyen despite her service had a deep hole in her heart that she needed filled. Her memories… her name. So much needed to be answered that couldn’t be. It wasn’t until a visit to the place she didn’t know was her home changed the 20 year old half goddesses life. until a quiet girl began tugging on her sleeve. Tsulyen didn’t know anything about the pre teen…and spoke, “Why do you come child…where are your friends?” The pre teen smiled and laughed lightly, although her voice was barely audible. The child’s face seemed so familiar to her… and she couldn’t put her finger on it. The girl was a powerful telepath though… and she whispered into Tsulyen’s ear, “Remember…” Tsu was completely confused and surprised by her words, but she was deathly silenced in the moments to come.
The girl… was Mao. Well grown… nearly mute, but well grown. Mao was a field hand at a farm not to far away, and the fact her sister remembered who she was only cheered her up instantly. She hugged her tightly, hoping she wouldn’t injure her, and the two began talking as much as they could. To learn so much about each other, and what their lives were like apart. Moon had gained so much in that short amount of time… a past…a family…and something she didn’t have in such a long time. A deep hatred. Vent quickly came back to mind as she remembered all she could, and swore to Mao, that with this next coming, with her current knowledge, she would lay waste to him. She left “Maiden” for Mao, and ran off without a second to waste.
Quickly arriving in ether hell, she faced the one man who made her life the living hell that it was. And she sought justice. Vent couldn’t tell who it was, because of how much she had changed…but the minute she spoke her name, he froze. “Youre the stupid child…who had her memory erased…” The statement caught her off guard. Erased? Who the hell could have wanted to bring that upon her? She ordered him to inform her who was behind it and he told her if she could defeat him, he would tell her. Tsulyen did what he did to her when they first faught… except she did it much faster, taking him out in only 4 powerful strikes to vital pressure points. She stood on his chest and ordered an answer. He only replied, “Heh…I may know who did it…but you know who did it also…and theyre right…under…youre…nose.”
In a rage she stomped on his chest, caving it in, and ending his life. Once again, she was stuck in a quandary… who was the one who did this? Who brought this crap upon her, and what could she do to stop them. She returned, telling Mao she avenged their family, but before she could see Mao again, she had to right one more wrong. She promised Maiden to Mao, and told her, “This is your keepsake…if you hold this…I will forever be with you.. Never let go. Never forget.” Her sister nodded and hugged her in a full embrace before Tsulyen left for the land of Xydrenas, the land of the High gods, meeting with Aurora again for the first time in half a year. Aurora was full in knowledge of what was going on , and didn’t ask questions, just smiled and said, “Frisky like a little bee arent we…Tsulyen?” She froze and smirked, replying, “Why didn’t you tell me?” Aurora replied, “Wouldn’t be much of a high diety if I helped now would I?” Tsulyen nodded and smirked.
But 3 years later, a very pivotal point came in the 23 year olds journey. She had achieved half goddess hood through battles, and proving her worth to Aurora more and more every job. She defeated Athena, forcing Athena into her life of jealousy, she had taken out one of Nanya’s top assassin guilds and had built a strong reputation for herself. But something still ate at her…ate at her soul. The cause of her memory being removed. She didn’t know who did it, but certain neigh gods and high gods acted very very suspicious or very kind around her. Especially Annika, the goddess of war. She was incredibly powerful, and was seen as one of the best the order of 12 had to offer. Tsulyen could see there was more behind this deception than Annika was putting on, hence Tsulyen openly challenged Annika in front of the order of 12 during a meeting of the assembly. Annika completely taken by surprise sighed and replied, “So be it dog…but I will win… and I put my title on the line.” Tsulyen nodded and smiled. Aurora put the two a simple contest, who ever reached the goal point first wins. And if both get there at the same time, then the battle is a fight to the death. It would take one week from then.
Tsulyen brutally beat her body into much greater shape than before, and was looking incredible going into the competition. If she didn’t train in the extremity that she did, it would have been very likely she would have lost. In fact, Tsulyen did get their first, but only a few nanoseconds before Annika did. Since Annika was being such a sore loser…she faught Tsulyen. Her strength and skill was incredible, and was beating on the assassin from the lone moon for a moment. But with a quick turn of the tide…Tsulyen dominated…and held her in a position, screaming for her to beg for mercy. Annika wouldn’t, and whispered, “That’s…why…I took…your memory…you little…bitch…. To get…one…last…laugh…before….you came…” Tsu nodded quietly, and quickly and efficiently snapped her neck, leaving her broken, bloodied, and dead body at her feet. Tsulyen quickly felt a new feeling through her blood… something that wasn’t normal, as she looked to Aurora with confusion, Aurora replied, “She put her title on the line… you not only gain her rank…but her power…welcome to the fold…neigh goddess…” Tsulyen froze, and didn’t say a word as her body gained mass, and tore through her outfit… she looked to Aurora and spoke, “So…do I still work under you mistress…?” Aurora nodded and said, “But you can also play an advisor role too…seeing how youre so wise now…”
It did not take too much time for her to get adjusted to her new body and rank. Despite her new mass, she was actually believe it or not, more flexible than she was before. Her powers were amplified several thousand fold, she was a true work of art. Aurora saw there was one final thing that had to be added. She gave her a new outfit…with the isgnia of war on it. “Wear this with pride…and wield this…” She handed her a black blade with a dim blue shine, “This… is Crescent Empress. I think you’ve earned that title.” Tsulyen now turns, not only planning on cutting a new path in her life, but to defend what else she holds dear. Armed with a past…a powerful present, and an apparently bright future, she cannot be stopped.
BOW. BOW TO HER! NOW O_O
Everything Mentioned. © BlackKusanagi
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/40297466/?qo=8&q=by%3Ablackkusanagi+Moon&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
Name : Tsulyen
Alias : Moon, Bee.
Age : Aging has stopped at 23.
Hair Color : Black with Silver Stripes
Eye Color : A haunting grey.
Race : Formerly Ashruian (An amazon race which lives on a distant moon), Now Neigh Goddess (an inbetween a normal god and a high god).
Skin Color : Caucasian Yet slightly Tanned.
Height : 6' 9” (when normal)
Weight : 3.5 Tons (bone n muscle, when normal)
Family : Bai-Ten and Ling-Tse (Parents, Mothers), Mao (sister)
Occupation : Aurora‘s Assassin, Advisor, Goddess Of War, former Miss Athena (although she wont admit that she used a different moniker and dyed her hair and wore contacts and changed her ki to enter, if anything, shell try to skip the subject if brought up in conversation.)
Build : Incredibly muscled yet feminine ...
Personality : Tsulyen is actually quite odd when you look at her. Around Aurora and others shes very close to, she can be serious, but then shes known to sneak in a quip here and there, and is actually quite light hearted. Apparently being around others gave her more reason to defend others she held close to heart. Around others she doesn’t know, she can be very distant, and hard to figure out… And on the battlefield or when killing, she can be far more devastating than she was before.
Danger Level : Being Aurora‘s protégé did have its perks. Not only does Moon have abilities far greater than neigh gods, she has physical abilities rivaling high gods, and a physical ability that’s above Miyu, but no where near Rina. She was already a very skilled warrior in Shinsen Ninjutsu and Kenjutsu. But after gaining her extra powers and becoming the goddess of war, she also became a very great commander in battle, mastered not only her forms of fighting and assassination, but also gained more skills within other martial arts. Her warping skills have greatly increased in power, make her a far deadlier foe than she was before. Ranking her at N/A.
From the Ning-Fu province of the Ashurian people's moon, Tsulyen had been the elder daughter of Bai-Ten and Ling-Tse. With her parents being two of the stronger females in the tribe, Tsulyen had enjoyed the level of respect her family had for one another. But one faithful day, their tribe was under attack from raveous beasts, lead by an arch demon, Vent. Before things could reach their worst point, Bai-Ten put her in a capsule and smiled, tapping the screen lightly as she was shoved off into the lake, young Tsulyen was in one capsule while the other containing her younger sister was shoved off. Tired she took a nap and had reawoken to be alone...the capsule holding her younger sister Mao, had dissapeared.
Frantically screaming for help, the young 5 year old was crying as she burried her face in her ragged pants as her capsule had hit land. It was about 190 miles from her village, so when she was freed by a few resident warriors from another tribe, she looked backwards to see the small smoke pillar. The clan studied several martial art forms, and could see the supernatural abilities that this child possessed. But before she knew it, she had reached the age of 14, and had mastered the arts they had for her. Once upon leaving the village, Tsu had begun her journey twards her old village, when Vent stood before her, a demonic smile on his face. Knowing instantly who he was, she screamed in a fury as she began to attack him in a violent fashion. Her skills were great...her power unbridled...sadly, it wasnt enough.
She was downed 2 minutes after she begun attacking. She had reawoken about 6 days later, looking about, confused. She had no memory of who she was... all she knew was how to fight. As she headed back into that village, the people were no longer there, but one was there taking care of the souls still rampant. Aurora. Not knowing why she was there, she didnt speak, but came right a the high goddess expecting to defeat her, but instead was nearly killed in 4 blows. Aurora looking her and judging her, she smiled saying, "Child...you may not know your name...but you will be my blade...arise...so I may give you a name." Complying with the one who defeated her, she stood slowly. Aurora spoke lightly, "As cold and as silent as the night of a full moon...your name shall be Moon... You will be my student...and with luck, youll find out more than you bargained for." Moon simply complied with, "Yes my leige...." That was a few months ago. She had grown in her goddess abilities over time, learning new skills, and wielding a blade Aurora had created from a native metal from Moon's home, called "Maiden" that she uses in her missions.
````` (Now for the update on her.)
Tsulyen despite her service had a deep hole in her heart that she needed filled. Her memories… her name. So much needed to be answered that couldn’t be. It wasn’t until a visit to the place she didn’t know was her home changed the 20 year old half goddesses life. until a quiet girl began tugging on her sleeve. Tsulyen didn’t know anything about the pre teen…and spoke, “Why do you come child…where are your friends?” The pre teen smiled and laughed lightly, although her voice was barely audible. The child’s face seemed so familiar to her… and she couldn’t put her finger on it. The girl was a powerful telepath though… and she whispered into Tsulyen’s ear, “Remember…” Tsu was completely confused and surprised by her words, but she was deathly silenced in the moments to come.
The girl… was Mao. Well grown… nearly mute, but well grown. Mao was a field hand at a farm not to far away, and the fact her sister remembered who she was only cheered her up instantly. She hugged her tightly, hoping she wouldn’t injure her, and the two began talking as much as they could. To learn so much about each other, and what their lives were like apart. Moon had gained so much in that short amount of time… a past…a family…and something she didn’t have in such a long time. A deep hatred. Vent quickly came back to mind as she remembered all she could, and swore to Mao, that with this next coming, with her current knowledge, she would lay waste to him. She left “Maiden” for Mao, and ran off without a second to waste.
Quickly arriving in ether hell, she faced the one man who made her life the living hell that it was. And she sought justice. Vent couldn’t tell who it was, because of how much she had changed…but the minute she spoke her name, he froze. “Youre the stupid child…who had her memory erased…” The statement caught her off guard. Erased? Who the hell could have wanted to bring that upon her? She ordered him to inform her who was behind it and he told her if she could defeat him, he would tell her. Tsulyen did what he did to her when they first faught… except she did it much faster, taking him out in only 4 powerful strikes to vital pressure points. She stood on his chest and ordered an answer. He only replied, “Heh…I may know who did it…but you know who did it also…and theyre right…under…youre…nose.”
In a rage she stomped on his chest, caving it in, and ending his life. Once again, she was stuck in a quandary… who was the one who did this? Who brought this crap upon her, and what could she do to stop them. She returned, telling Mao she avenged their family, but before she could see Mao again, she had to right one more wrong. She promised Maiden to Mao, and told her, “This is your keepsake…if you hold this…I will forever be with you.. Never let go. Never forget.” Her sister nodded and hugged her in a full embrace before Tsulyen left for the land of Xydrenas, the land of the High gods, meeting with Aurora again for the first time in half a year. Aurora was full in knowledge of what was going on , and didn’t ask questions, just smiled and said, “Frisky like a little bee arent we…Tsulyen?” She froze and smirked, replying, “Why didn’t you tell me?” Aurora replied, “Wouldn’t be much of a high diety if I helped now would I?” Tsulyen nodded and smirked.
But 3 years later, a very pivotal point came in the 23 year olds journey. She had achieved half goddess hood through battles, and proving her worth to Aurora more and more every job. She defeated Athena, forcing Athena into her life of jealousy, she had taken out one of Nanya’s top assassin guilds and had built a strong reputation for herself. But something still ate at her…ate at her soul. The cause of her memory being removed. She didn’t know who did it, but certain neigh gods and high gods acted very very suspicious or very kind around her. Especially Annika, the goddess of war. She was incredibly powerful, and was seen as one of the best the order of 12 had to offer. Tsulyen could see there was more behind this deception than Annika was putting on, hence Tsulyen openly challenged Annika in front of the order of 12 during a meeting of the assembly. Annika completely taken by surprise sighed and replied, “So be it dog…but I will win… and I put my title on the line.” Tsulyen nodded and smiled. Aurora put the two a simple contest, who ever reached the goal point first wins. And if both get there at the same time, then the battle is a fight to the death. It would take one week from then.
Tsulyen brutally beat her body into much greater shape than before, and was looking incredible going into the competition. If she didn’t train in the extremity that she did, it would have been very likely she would have lost. In fact, Tsulyen did get their first, but only a few nanoseconds before Annika did. Since Annika was being such a sore loser…she faught Tsulyen. Her strength and skill was incredible, and was beating on the assassin from the lone moon for a moment. But with a quick turn of the tide…Tsulyen dominated…and held her in a position, screaming for her to beg for mercy. Annika wouldn’t, and whispered, “That’s…why…I took…your memory…you little…bitch…. To get…one…last…laugh…before….you came…” Tsu nodded quietly, and quickly and efficiently snapped her neck, leaving her broken, bloodied, and dead body at her feet. Tsulyen quickly felt a new feeling through her blood… something that wasn’t normal, as she looked to Aurora with confusion, Aurora replied, “She put her title on the line… you not only gain her rank…but her power…welcome to the fold…neigh goddess…” Tsulyen froze, and didn’t say a word as her body gained mass, and tore through her outfit… she looked to Aurora and spoke, “So…do I still work under you mistress…?” Aurora nodded and said, “But you can also play an advisor role too…seeing how youre so wise now…”
It did not take too much time for her to get adjusted to her new body and rank. Despite her new mass, she was actually believe it or not, more flexible than she was before. Her powers were amplified several thousand fold, she was a true work of art. Aurora saw there was one final thing that had to be added. She gave her a new outfit…with the isgnia of war on it. “Wear this with pride…and wield this…” She handed her a black blade with a dim blue shine, “This… is Crescent Empress. I think you’ve earned that title.” Tsulyen now turns, not only planning on cutting a new path in her life, but to defend what else she holds dear. Armed with a past…a powerful present, and an apparently bright future, she cannot be stopped.
BOW. BOW TO HER! NOW O_O
Everything Mentioned. © BlackKusanagi
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