hmm, a good story...😌

Having read both of your storys now i ask...

Will you do more? will they also be of foxes?

i do hope you'll put pencil to paper again, or um, finger to screen...

anyway, this time i'll say it correctly...

Автор! Автор!

It is hard to write alone, when nobody can correct me.

My main problem is everyday life details - to write not "after a month, his pads grew thick and he can follow his wolf sibling to a big distance", but a long text how a boy adopted by wolves spent each his day.

do you mean "Translation"? Russain to English?

and you want to fill in that month's worth of time with more detail, extending the story as much as possible to make it more entertaining with out ruining it?
which i've done & regreted it.

Yes, this is the high aerobatics, like flying on a jet one meter above earth without touching it.

《i'm being playful》

🤔
well, you are aware i'd like to turn my BIG storys into games.
A - Z
there are a lot of points between that need to be filled up with main story & side quest to make it a worth while game.

😎 while i may have no proof of these storys for ya to look at hastily, i am fully capable of helping with this bit 😎

🤓 & when it comes to Translating things, i already hopscotch all over nitpicking words to learn if i find it interesting in sound (& short, eazy to spell), Magic in my games will be a mix of languages! i even go beyond for storys i write based on another region! i found a few apps that help with this as well 🤓

😀.....😐, 🥺 😪
the 2 areas i'll have trouble with is spelling & grammar.....

BUT! i *Try*!
so, you've helped me, so why not i return the favor?

if you remember i'm not around 24/7, but i can help ya Inry.

hozzit, good bad? Hm? Hm? Hm?


kidding aside, i would like to help you. i am going to do a number of things different because of you when it comes to my short storys, so after your help, let me do it back.

Very cool idea.

You can use it for free, with these characters/species or another ones just please without sex and TG (as if I can deny you if you want). =^.^=

I like this one, very good, and an interesting witness protection program!