Username:
KiyoshiOokami
Larger/Original Version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4638338
Species: Wolf
Gender: Male
Type of Media: Digitalart
Type of Response wanted: Redlines
Artist's Comments:
So yeah, earlier today I had a migraine and I felt like crap so I took a nap. An hour later I woke up and I felt much better. This took fifteen minutes to sketch then about an hour in Photoshop to color (I'm still getting used to it)
Art ©
KiyoshiOokami
All comments/help/criticism/redlines are appreciated!
KiyoshiOokamiLarger/Original Version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4638338
Species: Wolf
Gender: Male
Type of Media: Digitalart
Type of Response wanted: Redlines
Artist's Comments:
So yeah, earlier today I had a migraine and I felt like crap so I took a nap. An hour later I woke up and I felt much better. This took fifteen minutes to sketch then about an hour in Photoshop to color (I'm still getting used to it)
Art ©
KiyoshiOokamiAll comments/help/criticism/redlines are appreciated!
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Wolf
Size 900 x 995px
File Size 423.9 kB
Well, I did a quick redline: http://www.greywolfairlines.com/ima.....py_redline.jpg
My anatomy isn't to par with what I normally do, but I was stressing the main points of what you have done.
Basicly put:
~ shorter, thicker snout
~ more defined browline
~ watch where the neck should be. It should be an extention of the other side of the face, not the jaw.
I understand you did this kinda quickly, so I touched just the basics. I'll let you fill in the holes and ask questions on more specifics if you need.
My anatomy isn't to par with what I normally do, but I was stressing the main points of what you have done.
Basicly put:
~ shorter, thicker snout
~ more defined browline
~ watch where the neck should be. It should be an extention of the other side of the face, not the jaw.
I understand you did this kinda quickly, so I touched just the basics. I'll let you fill in the holes and ask questions on more specifics if you need.
Good going =) trouble with the heads is that they all need perspective to position the elements correctly. Sooo, try using a skeleton, here's a good tutorial for furry head skeleton =) http://www.drawfurry.com/?p=5
FA+

Comments