looks sketchy and cool, his tail seems problematic, and his face should be longer to be vash, but neet idea i like it ^-^

Okay, three things:
One, his face is pointing down at an angle.
Two, he's a furry, man. Long faces are usually not the norm unless we're talking horses.
Three, yeah, the tail is problematic because I realized that in the original sketch he didn't have one. So, I just put one in there at the last minute. Just accept it the way it is, please?

im not trying to insult im trying to help ya.

i accept the way it is im just finding what broke the picture, because when i saw it i was like " that looks very good" and once i took a look closer i noticed a couple things that might have made it a beter piece

so i thought it might help you out and tell you i like it but thiers a couple problems that break the picture sorry if your not open for critiquing im just used to doing it im an art student at college

so in short, sorry bad habbit, i like the piece though :D

...I don't how to answer that in a way that will actually stick...but do me a favor and tell your friends, huh? That would be great.

That's cool! The lineart and the colouring go well together. =)