I need a critique on this Promo card I'm planning to put out around town. Just need some Impute on it before I fully complete it.
The boxes at the bottom are where I'm putting the QR codes
Characters © Kim C. Jones
The boxes at the bottom are where I'm putting the QR codes
Characters © Kim C. Jones
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Bat
Size 567 x 351px
File Size 152.2 kB
Maybe other color on the pen to contrast with your character. Kinda lose the body of the bat with that of the pen.
Looks like theres plenty of empty space, below your name and the medias and between those and the OC.
Lastly, if this gonna be a print maybe enlarge the text at the bottom. And the TW thing, is already stated on the icon, so maybe make it more obvious there? using red and a bigger font xd
a proposal for making that text more simple:
NO {comms
NO {reqs
NO {trades
Hope it helps hshshs good luck :3
Looks like theres plenty of empty space, below your name and the medias and between those and the OC.
Lastly, if this gonna be a print maybe enlarge the text at the bottom. And the TW thing, is already stated on the icon, so maybe make it more obvious there? using red and a bigger font xd
a proposal for making that text more simple:
NO {comms
NO {reqs
NO {trades
Hope it helps hshshs good luck :3
The pen is the digital stylus pen I only see them in one color. Maybe I can make it a light grey?
I wonder if I should include the twitter cause it's rated +18 is it a good idea to put in twitter?
and That simple will people really understand that? Cause sometimes you get people who don't get it and you have to spell it out for them.
Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it :)
I wonder if I should include the twitter cause it's rated +18 is it a good idea to put in twitter?
and That simple will people really understand that? Cause sometimes you get people who don't get it and you have to spell it out for them.
Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it :)
About the Twitter, would depend on where u plan to distribute these cards, if its in a (fur)con using 🔞 emoji should be clear enuff. If its someplace with a more general attendence, not including it at all would be the best choice hshs.
And thus, after all this, u could resume that text into a single phrase I don't do comms, trades or reqs with a proper size font.
No problema :3
And thus, after all this, u could resume that text into a single phrase I don't do comms, trades or reqs with a proper size font.
No problema :3
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