It's nice to see stuff from you, Moongara! I love how this is turning out <3

Anyways I hope I can offer a few ideas to help!

The bodyshape is nearly perfect. The only thing that you could do more to them is make the knees and ank;es a bit bonier.

The head is so pretty! Though could you make the snout tip a bit smaller/thinner? I think that
s the only thing I can see about it. It's nose is just a bit too large. Otherwise, how pretty! I love this!

Thank you for the comment, its really helpful. (this was my first attempt at shaping the legs a bit more, so I have a ways to go)

I am curious, pertaining to the comment you made about the muzzle. The headpiece has a part that goes over the nose. Is that what you are referring to or the whole head?

Think of the profile of a horse as being composed of two circles. The muzzle/nose circle is about half the size of the circle composing it's eyes/jaw/cheek. You need to make your nuzzle half the size of it's head part. Hope that helps.

That's really helpful, actually. Thank you, I will remember that as I make my next horse sculpture.

Nice. ;3

Needs a thicker barrel and bonier legs. Possibly a shorter torso.

Honestly, no offense to you, but the fur/material you used for the actual body is extremely creepy to me. For some reason he looks lumpy and frankenstein ish. Like he was a bunch of pieces sewned together. I can't tell if its extra material folding, or the actual sew lines, or if the little outfit is causing the creases. I can't see that great ( my eyes are shot, lol ). The eye to me is too far forward and should be pushed back, also maybe a slightly bigger eye. There doesn't seem to be enough surve in the spine, and the legs ( the ones in the back especially ) are lacking in bone structure which throws the whole thing off, and makes it look, very doll baby style, despite its really nice details.

This, is a very unique thing though, and its extremely neat to look at, I'm very interested in this piece, I hope to see more! =) GOOD LUCK!