this one I figured was just too many pannels jumbled onto one page, so I split it up.

the first hale, I got rid of some of the pannels, changed the scret passageway's appearance. you will note some of the pannels were very similar. like how Andrés is in the same position when he removes his vest.

for the second half, I actually kept a lot of it the same.
I got rid of the curtains. I had Andrés close the secret door behind him >.> and I had Andrés hiding behind a tree instead of his cloak.