Strangely, this started to catch on as a fashion statement as tailed vixens (I know they were wolf tails but 'wolfesses' isn't as catchy)

And the proper term for a female canid has so many impolite connotations...

Looking good. If you want to improve readability, try adding a line break between paragraphs. It doesn't increase the file size much, and it breaks things up a lot. For instance:

Ahh, yes, now I remember where those two kids went off to, they were in 'my room' looking at the relics that have been saved for generations. Fortunately for them, half of the junk in there were gadgets and little executive toys. Though, when I arrived there the two plump tots were messing around with the pod.

"Ehem" I coughed, trying to get their attention, which I did as I saw their fur puffed up surprised. (By that time I was quickly enjoying the sight of frightened or aggravated furs. Seeing a fat fur get all poofy is such an amusing sight.)

"Oh, hi Mr. Robertson sir" both of them replied nervously, both of them trying to look cute while doing so.

"We are sorry for thawing you out" Sasha said fiddling with the bow on her ear, "we didn't know that our cryogenics kit could thaw you out."

"But that didn't stop us from trying" Richard said with a flick of his bald rat tail. He got a covert nudge from his sister before she turned to me saying, "if we knew that you were in there, we would have never tried over clocking the thawing module."

"We probably would have anyway, just to see what a five hundred year old human looked like" Richard mumbled, getting another, yet slightly less covert, nudge.

"Don't worry about it too much" I told them with a wave of my hand, "if you didn't thaw me then not only would I have a bigger case of freezer burn when I did, but also the world I would be in would be considerably stranger... like filled with sentient cars or something... I think there was a movie about that."

Thanks, I will start adding line breaks, I didn't before because when you put it in Word it already does that. But it apparently doesn't work here so I'll make that a mental note.

No problem; transferring across formats is always tricky.

Great job, and very interesting concept. ^^

You know, I should eventually get an 'official' name, but Topps seems to be pretty good.

Also, it may be interesting to note that certain labs in Britain have been greenlighted to start commingling human and animal DNA. So perhaps your story, as is so often the case with science fiction, is not too far fetched.

Thanks, I think "Topps H. Violet" should be your official name :3

Oh dear, I didn't even know that.
Who knows, this exact same situation might happen to one of my grandchildren :3

I think that the offspring need to be born human-animal hybrids...

...Still, I am intensely interested to see what science will create in the future.

I love it :)

Can hardly wait for next part

I'm glad you like it so much, I didn't know that there were going to be any number of people who would be interested in a normal human trying to live a 'normal' life among very fat furs.

It's a fresh point of view, besides, you write very well. It's an interesting future you describe, also apart from the furries.

Thanks, I try my best at writing, even if I'm too lazy to really go through and proof read it.

I read through the four chapters of this.

You started out a little sketchy, with a far too casual tone in Chapter 1, but I noticed that by chapter 3 you'd almost expunged all of those into a more professional-reading story. You seem to be steadily learning from all mistake you make, and that is good. There were still points where it was a little hard to follow - I was slightly confused by the Twilight exchange, for example. But your writing quality is improving, so good job overall. C:


It's at a fairly brisk pace so far, not moving to fast nor too slow, and introducing elements at a pace in which the readers aren't bombarded over the head with exposition nor left in the dark. This is thanks to the protagonist being frozen, surely, and a relic from what seems to be very near in our future, so we learn as he does. It's good for an introduction - if you had the protagonist an opossum child, for instance, we wouldn't relate as well because they are a relic of their time and not ours. It's a clever element.

Conceptually it's a fairly unique premise, and the fact that it does have this setting going for it can spur an interest in those that would not be drawn in by the idea of fat furs.

So overall, your pretty solid. C: Keep at it.

I'm very greatfull for your in depth critique. And I agree with all of it, and I must say this is the first time I've tried a kind of 'first person diary' perspective which is still experamental to allow a better condencation of information or 'needed' information.

Still, I'm very glad you like it and it's overall 'apperance' and so forth. And I'm glad for your 'investment' :D

^^ I'll look forward to seeing more C:

Heh, I'm glad you are excited. Feel free to draw fan art :3
I also hope to have more fun with the butterball children and more fatty lifestyle.

I hope there will be more installments soon.