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el-Koze
Link to Larger Version: http://imgur.com/7Tyfy.jpg
Submission Name: The Sound of Animals Fighting
Species: Lich bat-shepherd
Type of Media: Digital Art
Rating: General
Type of Response wanted: Constructive Criticism, Redlines, Feedback, etc. Basically anything.
Artist's Comments:
idea for some vent art because i was frustrated with not getting commissions right. i want to take this somewhere, i just don't know what.
i'm either thinking a priest outfit or some sort of post apocalyptic discordant type gear.
feel free to leave all sorts of input
the lettering will be more centered and not hand written, it's just a place holder. The character is my fursona, a lich bat-shepherd and she's supposed to be wearing half of a bat mask.
Art © el-Koze
All comments/help/criticism/redlines are appreciated!
el-KozeLink to Larger Version: http://imgur.com/7Tyfy.jpg
Submission Name: The Sound of Animals Fighting
Species: Lich bat-shepherd
Type of Media: Digital Art
Rating: General
Type of Response wanted: Constructive Criticism, Redlines, Feedback, etc. Basically anything.
Artist's Comments:
idea for some vent art because i was frustrated with not getting commissions right. i want to take this somewhere, i just don't know what.
i'm either thinking a priest outfit or some sort of post apocalyptic discordant type gear.
feel free to leave all sorts of input
the lettering will be more centered and not hand written, it's just a place holder. The character is my fursona, a lich bat-shepherd and she's supposed to be wearing half of a bat mask.
Art ©
el-KozeAll comments/help/criticism/redlines are appreciated!
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 600 x 900px
File Size 226.5 kB
http://f.weblionx.com/drawings/redl.....ch_redline.png
* Hair has thickness, as does the mask.
* People normally have necks :P You can do a fancy tall collar outfit, though (dotted lines). Of course you might have been going for the head being more forward, but then I think the sizing would have to change. It's a rough piece so it's hard for me to tell.
* The nose is lopsided at the moment
* Crosses are popular religious symbols, but there's a lot of other symbolism to use.
* Perspective/making a realistic "3D" environment can be a pain, but using it right can also change the mood of an image. Make the room go back really far (steeper lines, small back wall) would give it more intensity but might not be what you're going for.
Just my thoughts. Hope it helps.
* Hair has thickness, as does the mask.
* People normally have necks :P You can do a fancy tall collar outfit, though (dotted lines). Of course you might have been going for the head being more forward, but then I think the sizing would have to change. It's a rough piece so it's hard for me to tell.
* The nose is lopsided at the moment
* Crosses are popular religious symbols, but there's a lot of other symbolism to use.
* Perspective/making a realistic "3D" environment can be a pain, but using it right can also change the mood of an image. Make the room go back really far (steeper lines, small back wall) would give it more intensity but might not be what you're going for.
Just my thoughts. Hope it helps.
Oh, as for the outfit (priest vs. post-apocalyptic, or both!) you'll probably want to add some detail down the front of it to keep it on the same level as the rest. Even just a seam (zipper, buttons, or pattern) down the middle would break up the large single color area, but might not be what you're going for.
Honestly, this picture looks really off to me. I don't know what to critique because I'm not sure what I'm looking at (no offense to you! I'm just not in the right mind frame right now). I agree with 
Webster's redlines, things are a bit off anatomy wise, but with a little help it will look so much better!
Good luck!! =)
Webster's redlines, things are a bit off anatomy wise, but with a little help it will look so much better!Good luck!! =)
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