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SNOW’S STORY
*sorry for lousy title but only thing I could come up with. Anyway this story will be my fursona background and should help me come up with even more stories ideas. Anyway on with show :3 *
It was the middle of winter here in the big city snow piling up and still more to come I was outside saleing magic potions. Oh but I‘m getting ahead of myself my names Snow and I‘m a Gabumon. I get my name due to my white fur and shy personality. I’m about 4ft 10 and weigh about 230 pounds. Yeah I’m a bit tubby but I like it. I know it’s kind of weird to find my kind. Well in fact I haven’t seen anyone else that even looked like me. But if I learned anything from my days at my mystic arts school is that the world is a big place. Huh you want to know more about the school? Well guess it is ok to tell you. How long has it been since I last been there?….oh right it’s been three years now you she I was born and raised there so I I stayed there for 15 years till a unfortunate event took place there. I will never forget that day.
3 years earlier
My clock goes off at 5:15am telling me to get out of bed. I first use my tail to turn of the curse thing that has being waking me for years on in but then I remembered what day it was. “Today is finally the day!!” today was the day I learn about spells that control the elements you know air, earth, water, etc. I was so happy that my master finally moved me up from transforming magic I’ve been learning it ever since I was five. I had that skill down to a art now so this was a great change for me. As I rush out of bed I want to my closest to get my things for class. “let’s see where did I put that thing.” I dug though my closest looking for my spell book you think I keep it somewhere I could find it easily. “ah here it is.” it seems it was right under my old training staff. It was worn out and unusable but I didn’t want to throw it away due to the many fond memories. The bell rings tell me I have 10mins before class starts so I rush out of my room and make a dash for the main building. The school is also my home so I usually always on time but the class I was going to was on the other side of the building making it a 12min walk there so I will be cutting it close. I was making good time as I passed the center square of the school well in till I someone tripped me up making me roll right into a wall.” ahaha you should watch your stop tubby guy never know what around the corner.” his name was Nick the gray wolf he studied in sword magic and is top in his class. And towering over me at 8ft10 with a bit of muscle made him well known though out the school. He usually picks on these who study Element magic and doesn’t have has so called perfect body. But for the most part he just looks for me. “Sorry your right I should have watched were I was going I will make sure to do that next time.” as I try to turn and leave he steps in front of me again blocking me. “not so fast there shortie I think you owe me for that great tip.” he thinks it over as if I didn’t know what he wanted. “ I know how about we have a little magi dual?” Magi duals are when mages fight it out till one is left standing. But here at the school is a bit different. Here our powers reduced by 80% thanks to the anti-magic field placed here by our elder. Also they are to be only used if a teacher is around to ref the dual ( but because Nick is so much of a kiss up and also the elder’s son he can do it when ever he wants). Also we dual for rank points it‘s where he also get‘s most of his fame from. “I really don’t have time for a dual can we post pone it?” I really didn’t want to dual him not only will I lose what little points I got but I will be late for class. “well then we better make this quick” He takes out his wooden training sword and goes into his battle stance. I sigh talking there no way out of it other then to make a swift defect. So I took up my battle stance waiting on him to make a move…….”HERE I COME!!!!” he yells his famous battle cry and comes at me head on. I on the other head ran away as I know I couldn’t beat him besides I really had no time to deal with this. “ running away again huh tubby?” he then uses his dash spell increasing his speed by 10% (it should really be by 50% ) in no time he was in front of me ready to strike me down with his sword.
But I was able to dodge it by going between his legs and keep running to my class. He was stun at how I was able to do that but quickly regain his senses and kept up the chase. He then started to cast a gravity spell on me “this should slow you down VAK DOM!!!” I suddenly felt heavier as if my weight as increasing over 10x making me walk then crawl till he put his foot on my back. “you got no where left to run now.” as he was about to make the finally blow I use my transformation spell inflating my body 5x it’s size and getting Nick off my back. I then rolled away while Nick was left seeing stars. I make it to close with 3 minutes to spare. I deflate back to my normal size and make it to classroom. “So Snow you made it” Kite my classmate and only friend he’s a fox elemental in training. He was here for the advancement in his skill level and to give me a few pointers after class. He always wore the same long robe with a hood though he never put the hood on says it blinds him. And he too was much taller then me stand about 6ft 8inchs. “ I see they finally let you in this year huh Snow?” “yeah guess my hard work is finally paying off. Now I can learn some real spells.” “ but your transformation magic is great I mean you use it so well” He was about that I use it so much it become other part of me. I also use it for fun cause I like the feeling of blowing myself up to huge sizes or shrinking down to hide from Nick. Or just fattening myself up to rub my belly, I took great joy in doing those in my free time. “yeah but it will be nice to up my choices on spells.” The bell rings for the start of class and we take our seats as our teacher enters the room. He was a wise old griffin his name is Master Van or just Van when not in class. he wears one of the grand masters robes those were only handed to a few and can only be given to those who have mastered all the arts. “ nice to see you two on time for once.” we had a bit of a history with being late before all due to Nick “I wouldn’t miss this class for the world.” I Say excitedly “well then let’s begin the class.” A few hours later class ends with me and kite crawling out of the class room. “I never know just learning about the four elements would be this hard on the first day no less” the training was as hard as I thought as he nearly killed us with just telling us about it. “Will it could be worse Snow he could have given us homework.” no soon did he say that we got busted with a steam of books. “thanks for reminding my Kite I almost forgot.” “yeah good going Kite.”
After we got all of home done Kite give me some pointers on a few spells that could be on the test in class. I was very thankful to him for helping me out. Times were good back then but two months into the school year is the day my life changed forever. It started out by me wakening up not hearing my clock go off. I should have taken that as my first sign as it always woke me up even when I wanted to sleep in. so thinking I was going to be late for class I get my books and rush out to class. The first thing I seen or didn’t see was the other students that usually hang around chatting. Then I thought I was just really late so I kept going. The next thing I notice was as I near my classroom that I haven’t bumped into Nick at all. He would always be waiting to dual me by now. But just thought he went to pick on someone else. But as I got into the class room I drop my books to ground seeing or not seeing the classroom. It was just gone all that was there was Scorched. “what the?! What happened here?” Then some kind of explode goes off at the front of the school so I rush out to see what was happening. I make it there to find Kite and Master Van fighting Nick or at least it looked like him but he was totally different. His whole far was darker and his eyes glow a bloody red he also had a weird looking sword that give off some a evil aura. “Master, Kite what’s going on here?” “you got to get away from Snow Nick has gone mad with power.” “I don’t understand. Before they could tell me more Nick attacked with a wave of dark energy. It sent me flying into a pillar the master and Kite stood there ground. “ Nice to see you join us tubby your just in time to see the new ruler of this school. And with my foolish grandfather out the way no one will get in the way.” “what he killed the elder?” I say I shock. “this is worse then I feared Kite you and Snow have to get away from here. I will hold him off as much as I can.” “But master…” I no time to talk as Kite took my paw and started running dragging me with him. The last thing I heard Master Van say was “stay true to heart.” after we got far away from where the battle was kite stopped running trying to regain his breath. I pulled my head away from him mad that we just left master there to fight by himself. “Kite we should head back and help Master there’s no way he can fight him by himself.’ then Kite hit me trying to bring me back to reality. “Snow you must leave from here.” I couldn’t believe what he was saying to me. “ what are you saying Kite what about…” “JUST GO!!!” I meep at the sudden outburst but he calms back down and tries to explain to me again. “ look me and the master were just have trouble trying to stand up there’s no way we can win. He has already imprison the students we are the only two left.” “witch is why I will imprison you two as well.” we turn around to see Nick coming at us Kite got into his battle stance and I join him as well my legs feeling weak not knowing if I will live though this. “ Snow you have to run your no much for him.” “NO!! I’m staying I won’t let any more of friends sacrifice themselves for me.” with a flash Nick was aiming his sword at my face but Kite pushed my to the side just in time and the only thing I lost was the tip of my horn. But the force of the hit was enough to sending me flying a few feet away and knocking me out. (ok good reader at this part I’m about to tell you is something I couldn’t have seen but if I didn’t tell you the story would end here. just a heads up.) “nice save there guess that’s why your rank 2ed in the school.” “well I’m not just other handsome face you know. “ well then guess I will have to MASS UP THAT FACE OF YOURS!!” Nick made a lunge at Kite but he quickly evaded his attack and countered with a water pulse spell (water envelopes his paw and able to send any foe away) . But Nick was ready for it and use a fire veil (stops all water type attacks) making his punch not as effective.
This give Nick the opening he needed and used a hyper beam ( yes a pokemon move….leave me alone) sending Kite flying and on the ground next to me. “looks like that’s all you got. You two aren’t even worth imprisoning I will send you both to see you master in the other world.” he then summons a huge ball of fire making it grow bigger with every sec that passed. “got to think fast or we are both done for,” Kite dig though his pocket and took out a colorful orb. “ guess this is the only way” I finally woke up in time to see the massive fire ball and Kite throw the orb at me which then made a hole under me make me fell inside just before Nick cast the spell “FIRE PILLAR!!” he then sent it at Kite who didn’t have time to jump in the hole with me. The last thing I heard him say before the hole close up was “ stay strong” he smiled as I sew the fire take him and the hole closed up. “KITE!!!”
It’s been 3yrs since that day and I’m no closer to getting back home. The orb seem to have sent me to other world as people I never seen before walk in and there paying me no mind. I now make a living doing magic tricks. And forced to live on the streets with the only thing keeping me going was the orb. Yes I still had it but had no idea how it works. So I just keep it in hopes it works again. For one day I will take back what was lost to me yrs ago.
*well my 1st story done tell me how i did and how i can make it better*
I'm moving this to Scarps as I'm going to re do it and make a better background Story
*sorry for lousy title but only thing I could come up with. Anyway this story will be my fursona background and should help me come up with even more stories ideas. Anyway on with show :3 *
It was the middle of winter here in the big city snow piling up and still more to come I was outside saleing magic potions. Oh but I‘m getting ahead of myself my names Snow and I‘m a Gabumon. I get my name due to my white fur and shy personality. I’m about 4ft 10 and weigh about 230 pounds. Yeah I’m a bit tubby but I like it. I know it’s kind of weird to find my kind. Well in fact I haven’t seen anyone else that even looked like me. But if I learned anything from my days at my mystic arts school is that the world is a big place. Huh you want to know more about the school? Well guess it is ok to tell you. How long has it been since I last been there?….oh right it’s been three years now you she I was born and raised there so I I stayed there for 15 years till a unfortunate event took place there. I will never forget that day.
3 years earlier
My clock goes off at 5:15am telling me to get out of bed. I first use my tail to turn of the curse thing that has being waking me for years on in but then I remembered what day it was. “Today is finally the day!!” today was the day I learn about spells that control the elements you know air, earth, water, etc. I was so happy that my master finally moved me up from transforming magic I’ve been learning it ever since I was five. I had that skill down to a art now so this was a great change for me. As I rush out of bed I want to my closest to get my things for class. “let’s see where did I put that thing.” I dug though my closest looking for my spell book you think I keep it somewhere I could find it easily. “ah here it is.” it seems it was right under my old training staff. It was worn out and unusable but I didn’t want to throw it away due to the many fond memories. The bell rings tell me I have 10mins before class starts so I rush out of my room and make a dash for the main building. The school is also my home so I usually always on time but the class I was going to was on the other side of the building making it a 12min walk there so I will be cutting it close. I was making good time as I passed the center square of the school well in till I someone tripped me up making me roll right into a wall.” ahaha you should watch your stop tubby guy never know what around the corner.” his name was Nick the gray wolf he studied in sword magic and is top in his class. And towering over me at 8ft10 with a bit of muscle made him well known though out the school. He usually picks on these who study Element magic and doesn’t have has so called perfect body. But for the most part he just looks for me. “Sorry your right I should have watched were I was going I will make sure to do that next time.” as I try to turn and leave he steps in front of me again blocking me. “not so fast there shortie I think you owe me for that great tip.” he thinks it over as if I didn’t know what he wanted. “ I know how about we have a little magi dual?” Magi duals are when mages fight it out till one is left standing. But here at the school is a bit different. Here our powers reduced by 80% thanks to the anti-magic field placed here by our elder. Also they are to be only used if a teacher is around to ref the dual ( but because Nick is so much of a kiss up and also the elder’s son he can do it when ever he wants). Also we dual for rank points it‘s where he also get‘s most of his fame from. “I really don’t have time for a dual can we post pone it?” I really didn’t want to dual him not only will I lose what little points I got but I will be late for class. “well then we better make this quick” He takes out his wooden training sword and goes into his battle stance. I sigh talking there no way out of it other then to make a swift defect. So I took up my battle stance waiting on him to make a move…….”HERE I COME!!!!” he yells his famous battle cry and comes at me head on. I on the other head ran away as I know I couldn’t beat him besides I really had no time to deal with this. “ running away again huh tubby?” he then uses his dash spell increasing his speed by 10% (it should really be by 50% ) in no time he was in front of me ready to strike me down with his sword.
But I was able to dodge it by going between his legs and keep running to my class. He was stun at how I was able to do that but quickly regain his senses and kept up the chase. He then started to cast a gravity spell on me “this should slow you down VAK DOM!!!” I suddenly felt heavier as if my weight as increasing over 10x making me walk then crawl till he put his foot on my back. “you got no where left to run now.” as he was about to make the finally blow I use my transformation spell inflating my body 5x it’s size and getting Nick off my back. I then rolled away while Nick was left seeing stars. I make it to close with 3 minutes to spare. I deflate back to my normal size and make it to classroom. “So Snow you made it” Kite my classmate and only friend he’s a fox elemental in training. He was here for the advancement in his skill level and to give me a few pointers after class. He always wore the same long robe with a hood though he never put the hood on says it blinds him. And he too was much taller then me stand about 6ft 8inchs. “ I see they finally let you in this year huh Snow?” “yeah guess my hard work is finally paying off. Now I can learn some real spells.” “ but your transformation magic is great I mean you use it so well” He was about that I use it so much it become other part of me. I also use it for fun cause I like the feeling of blowing myself up to huge sizes or shrinking down to hide from Nick. Or just fattening myself up to rub my belly, I took great joy in doing those in my free time. “yeah but it will be nice to up my choices on spells.” The bell rings for the start of class and we take our seats as our teacher enters the room. He was a wise old griffin his name is Master Van or just Van when not in class. he wears one of the grand masters robes those were only handed to a few and can only be given to those who have mastered all the arts. “ nice to see you two on time for once.” we had a bit of a history with being late before all due to Nick “I wouldn’t miss this class for the world.” I Say excitedly “well then let’s begin the class.” A few hours later class ends with me and kite crawling out of the class room. “I never know just learning about the four elements would be this hard on the first day no less” the training was as hard as I thought as he nearly killed us with just telling us about it. “Will it could be worse Snow he could have given us homework.” no soon did he say that we got busted with a steam of books. “thanks for reminding my Kite I almost forgot.” “yeah good going Kite.”
After we got all of home done Kite give me some pointers on a few spells that could be on the test in class. I was very thankful to him for helping me out. Times were good back then but two months into the school year is the day my life changed forever. It started out by me wakening up not hearing my clock go off. I should have taken that as my first sign as it always woke me up even when I wanted to sleep in. so thinking I was going to be late for class I get my books and rush out to class. The first thing I seen or didn’t see was the other students that usually hang around chatting. Then I thought I was just really late so I kept going. The next thing I notice was as I near my classroom that I haven’t bumped into Nick at all. He would always be waiting to dual me by now. But just thought he went to pick on someone else. But as I got into the class room I drop my books to ground seeing or not seeing the classroom. It was just gone all that was there was Scorched. “what the?! What happened here?” Then some kind of explode goes off at the front of the school so I rush out to see what was happening. I make it there to find Kite and Master Van fighting Nick or at least it looked like him but he was totally different. His whole far was darker and his eyes glow a bloody red he also had a weird looking sword that give off some a evil aura. “Master, Kite what’s going on here?” “you got to get away from Snow Nick has gone mad with power.” “I don’t understand. Before they could tell me more Nick attacked with a wave of dark energy. It sent me flying into a pillar the master and Kite stood there ground. “ Nice to see you join us tubby your just in time to see the new ruler of this school. And with my foolish grandfather out the way no one will get in the way.” “what he killed the elder?” I say I shock. “this is worse then I feared Kite you and Snow have to get away from here. I will hold him off as much as I can.” “But master…” I no time to talk as Kite took my paw and started running dragging me with him. The last thing I heard Master Van say was “stay true to heart.” after we got far away from where the battle was kite stopped running trying to regain his breath. I pulled my head away from him mad that we just left master there to fight by himself. “Kite we should head back and help Master there’s no way he can fight him by himself.’ then Kite hit me trying to bring me back to reality. “Snow you must leave from here.” I couldn’t believe what he was saying to me. “ what are you saying Kite what about…” “JUST GO!!!” I meep at the sudden outburst but he calms back down and tries to explain to me again. “ look me and the master were just have trouble trying to stand up there’s no way we can win. He has already imprison the students we are the only two left.” “witch is why I will imprison you two as well.” we turn around to see Nick coming at us Kite got into his battle stance and I join him as well my legs feeling weak not knowing if I will live though this. “ Snow you have to run your no much for him.” “NO!! I’m staying I won’t let any more of friends sacrifice themselves for me.” with a flash Nick was aiming his sword at my face but Kite pushed my to the side just in time and the only thing I lost was the tip of my horn. But the force of the hit was enough to sending me flying a few feet away and knocking me out. (ok good reader at this part I’m about to tell you is something I couldn’t have seen but if I didn’t tell you the story would end here. just a heads up.) “nice save there guess that’s why your rank 2ed in the school.” “well I’m not just other handsome face you know. “ well then guess I will have to MASS UP THAT FACE OF YOURS!!” Nick made a lunge at Kite but he quickly evaded his attack and countered with a water pulse spell (water envelopes his paw and able to send any foe away) . But Nick was ready for it and use a fire veil (stops all water type attacks) making his punch not as effective.
This give Nick the opening he needed and used a hyper beam ( yes a pokemon move….leave me alone) sending Kite flying and on the ground next to me. “looks like that’s all you got. You two aren’t even worth imprisoning I will send you both to see you master in the other world.” he then summons a huge ball of fire making it grow bigger with every sec that passed. “got to think fast or we are both done for,” Kite dig though his pocket and took out a colorful orb. “ guess this is the only way” I finally woke up in time to see the massive fire ball and Kite throw the orb at me which then made a hole under me make me fell inside just before Nick cast the spell “FIRE PILLAR!!” he then sent it at Kite who didn’t have time to jump in the hole with me. The last thing I heard him say before the hole close up was “ stay strong” he smiled as I sew the fire take him and the hole closed up. “KITE!!!”
It’s been 3yrs since that day and I’m no closer to getting back home. The orb seem to have sent me to other world as people I never seen before walk in and there paying me no mind. I now make a living doing magic tricks. And forced to live on the streets with the only thing keeping me going was the orb. Yes I still had it but had no idea how it works. So I just keep it in hopes it works again. For one day I will take back what was lost to me yrs ago.
*well my 1st story done tell me how i did and how i can make it better*
I'm moving this to Scarps as I'm going to re do it and make a better background Story
Category Story / Digimon
Species Wolf
Good so far. So spelling errors and sentence problems. I noticed you got some sentences where you mix in present tense words where it should have been past tense. Also, try to space out the writing since it is very difficult to read at that size when so much is all crammed together.
Other than that it is pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.
Other than that it is pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.
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