maybe a trim at end 20 sec of Nuthing XD lol and idk much about gabber ....Hardstyle yes, But I like the song !!!
Great work cant wait for more!!

XD yeah sorry about that time at the end some reason Sonar (my recording program) added a few seconds at the end for even though I stoped recording it aparently was still geting a Midi message from my synth :P I'll be shure to edit that out when I work on this song again.

XD yeah sorry about that time at the end some reason Sonar (my recording program) added a few seconds at the end for even though I stoped recording it aparently was still geting a Midi message from my synth :P I'll be shure to edit that out when I work on this song again.

i don't know , i likes it though, maybeh have the song rise up again and fall, like a heartbeat? it would prove interesting.good job so far.

That is what I was planing This is only the first part of the song for I really didn't write anything after. The reason was that I really wanted feed back on it.

I planed to rise, fall then rise back again. Since most gabber is like that.

Finally Something I can critique x3

First off.. I want the Flp x3
This is awesome

Anyways off to the Constructive Crit..

I love the build in the beginning.. tho
I would like to hear something more exciting

fade it in maybe?.. maybe a break and CRASH X3

Also the synths in the begging don't blend
they seem to almost overwrite each other
no flow o.o;
tho that just might be the trance artist in me coming out x3

I love the style and hardstyle is my thing
I like how it jumps around parts, this shows a bit of variety =P

Its deff pounding like hardstyle should be =D

Tho the more I listen to it, the more I wanna play with it x3

Tho towards the end I love the Guitar like TB-303 sample that's a nice addition

all in all its a nice put together but it needs work o.o;
But you deff got the idea down here,
I like it ^-^;

That's all I can say o.o

FLP? Not shure what that stands for :P though Im not very good with ancronyms..

Thanks for noting the Build. I Tried to lead in with the drums clean then becomeing more and more distorted. This is to give a feel to the listener of Dark aproching. XD (im evil)

The original Synth that I chose was acrully a Hoover.. Though it didn't quite sound right perhaps I will change back to the Hoover and see what you think.

As for fading out.. I didn't plan to do so in the begining of the song. Since I was trying to build up and become faster and faster to get the blood pumping sorta speak.. Then cool it down as the TB-303 comes in at the end. It will solo for a while then come back again.. So sorta like a rise, fall ,rise pattern.

Also after listening to other gabber songs I noted that alot of the movement is Drum bassed where the resononce and cutoff as well as the gain of the distortion shifts alot.. I figured that I would try and mimic that and see where it goes. XD glad that it made an impression..

"Tho towards the end I love the Guitar like TB-303 sample that's a nice addition"

This quote cracks me up XD that is a Tb-303 not a guitar and not a sample either. Though why do you say it sound like a guitar? I did use slight overdrive with it <.<

And Finally Yes It does need work =D so glad to of got feed back on it so I can work out all the bugs. Thank you..

The FLP is the project file the song Fl studio saves in..

I'm just curious and would love to peek at it =P and if I edit anything i'd tell ya

XD Oooh well your out of luck... I don't use FL Studio.

:P I use hardware, If you peek in my gallery I have pictures of most of my Equipment.

I used the Roland Juno-G to create the Ambient tracks Using the Alpha Stack and the Killerbeez patches. A Real TR-909 Drummatrix (aka Drum Machine) and the Real TB-303 Bassline. I feed all of this through my mixer (Xeneth)and that out to the line in jack of my PC. I recorded it all with CakeWalk Sonar 8.5 that came with my Juno when I bought it at Guitar Center :P

Unlike many composers on FA. Im a hardware user sorta like a traditional Music composer compared to digital. This gives me a wide range of what I can do for I can reroute audio on many levels to get the desired effect that I want.

I used the Metal Zone From boss to create the distortion as well as the "Insaine" Distortion from the Line 6 amp For the Drums. I created an Fx loop with my mixer so I could better manage the levels :P

The main files are saved on the juno itself and there .SVA .SNG files. Sonar uses .CWP and all you would see are audio tracks..

:P Sorry I couldn't be more of a help. I never realized untill now that all my music cant be matched. Thinking about it you would need my exact equipment to reproduce my sounds..

The best I can do is write out sheet music for you since I am able to do that.. Though you would have to reprogram everything yourself. And again you wouldn't be able to match up any of the sounds I use.

oh wow.. I appalud you x3

All I have is Flstudio
I wish I had the hardware to put this stuff together =P

but to do it with out digital takes skill =3

XD not really.. I used to use software then built up my hardware colection before I just decided that hardware was the better route. Software had become easier than speaking ig pay atin lay..(pig latin)

I have for a short while dabbled with FL Studio and hated it greatly for its over complex User interface. XD I Can arrange faster and better with programs like Cubase,Sonar, and Reason than FL studio :P

I given up on software other than recording what I can produce on my hardware. I have more control over what I can do ^^ and it isn't hard to just hook up cables from audio in to audio out.. XD just it tends to take up lots of room and wires everywhere is a hassle ^^ but i wouldn't change that for anything.

I didn't realize that the group reposted my work XD I was waiting for comments on the actrual page where I posted it lol..

I didn't post this, so I assumed you would have been noted. My apologies, we're still trying to figure out how to transfer information between myself and all the admins.
~ WolvenRemorse

You might want to turn up the bass a bit. I know it might seem excessive, but a techno song like this really needs to "thump" and my subwoofer doesn't seem to be working very hard right now. It's also a tad bit fast for the club scene, not that you were intending it to be a club song. Just something to consider.

Where the music slows at around 1:35 or so is also a bit jarring. If people were moving to the music the sudden change might throw off their rhythm.

I like the general melody, though, and the overall feel. It'll be nice to hear it once it's done.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gabber

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IGsfeiExC4Q

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EWpEgLBeqFg

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MLkL8D1tcu0

Alot of people commenting just don't know what gabber is all about. Its fast and hard around 150-220+ in tempo. Distortion is key along with dark ambience fast build and quick releases.

This music is all about the dark feel. Again like the Heavey Metal of techno it enrages angers and puts fear into the emotions of the music.

Though I will take note to turn up the bass. Pehaps too I will fade into the as the Tb-303 come in so it will be less suden. Thanks for commenting ^^

Ah I see. Then ignore my comments about the BPM and the club scene. I see what you're going for now.

XD yeap. I don't know about the club scenes that you are used to though I have seen mash pits on gabber.. It awesome..