Very cool

Thank You

cieszy mnie to ^^

"Whoa! I'm not kissing a poisonous fumes factory!"

true, true. dzieki

Klimatyczneeeee :)jeszcze pepesza by się przydała ;)

pepesza? o_O

Inspirational talent , between the two of you , in this one.

The composition and contrast are splendid.

:) Thank you. I hope I or Edi will finish it someday

Finish?

yep. it has same mistakes in colouring, not finished background

Sharp... and loose. A flow.
Whiskey, wine, and dancing smoke.

The background fades into a mirage, and the characters are brought to life.
The crimsons and red accentuate their lit soul. The fire.

I can't see it from your eyes, but am curious:
What mistakes do you feel you've made, with the coloring?

I should add the shadows of the girl and grey tones in background. :)

I think I can see (to further accentuate?) -- from here, she's beautiful as is. The deeper grays might bring her into it, and the lighter might make her stand out too much. The tones glide together well. (left to right, right to left, down to up)
The subtle clouds drifting off of her, and into the air, are uplifting.

Of course, I'm sure you could find a way to enhance the vision -- these are just my thoughts.

Hm, first time through, I didn't quite see the clouds.

only, the heat

illusory,
but it seems, to be nice like that

couldn't reply, and had to 'f5' a few times before the button would work.

xD I understand, if you want to talk, just send me a note

Classy.

Thanks