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FuryRogue True daughter of Horde. (Echoes of war) pt2.
[The story is told from the Colonel's point of view. He found in the garrisons the story "Echo of War" where all sorts of details were described. I bring some points from myself, in order to make it clear how this plot is intertwined with the "Secrets of Fozgorod".]
After joining the horde. She was offered to go on an expedition to the lost islands. She readily agreed. After all, there she could find her much-needed companions who could teach her something.
There were indeed such people on the expedition. Among these personalities were experienced rogue's. Many of them were well versed in poisons. They taught her how to make a hallucinogenic poison. And a poison that causes terrible torment, but does not kill. Taught her how to fight for real. Uncle Lu didn't teach her that. After all, he quickly realized who he was doing. Although she thought that he did not suspect what was happening to her.
On the same expedition, she was told about the Dreadblades. They said that where they sailed, it was possible that the blades were lost. And so it turned out. The blades ended up in one of the tombs, not far from the shore. Everyone rushed to explore it. However, she turned in the right direction and found them just lying on the floor. Taking them in hand. She heard screams. Running outside, she saw how all her companions began to rot alive, as if they were attacked by death knights. But... not a single death knight was on their team.
After a couple of moments, only skeletons remained around her. She stood and did not understand what had happened. All she could do was leave a sign on this island, "Go past if you want to live"
FuryRogue : The Dreadblades... One of the team members had a pistol, she took it. "There will be no excess".
The cadaverous smell slowly but surely filled her lungs and she began to lose consciousness. She lost consciousness. And I woke up a few days later, in one of the tents of a very hospitable city called "Fozgorod"
Enzis : Well milady, how do you feel?
She didn't know who it was in front of her. Wolf. She had heard of those. But the humanoid wolves were only in one place... rather, even in one faction.
Quickly catching "Last Breath" she held it to Worgen's throat with a question.
FuryRogue : Who the hell are you?
Enzis : The healer who saved your life! You were found on the beach surrounded by a whole bunch of skeletons.
She quickly ran out of the tent and saw a city that didn't even come close to Orgrimmar.
Enzis ran after her. She continued her conversation with him, standing with her back to him.
FuryRogue : Did you take off my mask? And where the hell am I?
Enzis : You are in Fozgorod. One of the cities of the Alliance.
FuryRogue : DID YOU TAKE OFF MY MASK?
Enzis : Yes.
FuryRogue : You'll regret it. But first. How can I get out of here?
Enzis : Through the gate, where are you going in this state?
FuryRogue : Away from you, stinking dog...
Enzis : Well, thank you, the first patient, and such compliments.
FuryRogue : Where are my blades?
Enzis : Blades in the tent. Tell me where you're going.
FuryRogue : Dream. Alliance dog.
Enzis : Ugliness. Get out of here! with your blades and everything you had there. The gate is north of here.
Taking her blades, she wanted this dog to rot like her comrades. But this didn't happen.
FuryRogue : Are you saying it's Fozgorod? I know where to start.
After leaving the city, she was already thinking about what to do with someone who saw her face. No one in the Alliance should know what she looks like. No one.
And Nobody knew. Until I got caught by her. The Colonel rolled up his left sleeve.
See these scars? This is her job. We found the same cuts on the corpse of our scout. One to One.
Fozgorod was hidden from the maps for a long time, the Horde did not know where it was. Until she was accidentally brought to this city. We have gathered in it our best healers.
Her first and biggest case was the sabotage in Fozgorod about 6 years ago.
During this sabotage, she wanted to get rid of the only living being that saw her face. It was then that her main skill appeared. Eloquence. She convinced everyone in the city that Anduin would be a terrible king, and eventually go completely insane.
It was a long and painstaking job. But she managed to start mass uprisings. Only 1 panda, and how much noise? How many actions. Her initiative could not be overlooked. In the ranks of the Horde, she could have received a very high rank, if it weren’t for... Wait, it’s funny to myself... If only she wasn't a panda.
It didn't upset her. After all, she received her own garrison after such a big deal. But that wasn't what she needed.
If she had not been discovered, she would have made the poor Healer suffer. The heal, the last survivor healer after all these uprisings.
The fozgorod guards began hunting her. And she had to run and hide.
Now with such influence. And opportunities. She had a dream. She wants to reforge her blades into Thunderfury. This can be done if you fulfill certain conditions, and collect everything you need.
One of the nights when it will rain heavily, she wants to fight with that worgen face to face.
Beautiful isn't it? In between torture, she told me about her dreams, I will never understand why she did this, apparently there is simply no one to communicate with. Or thought that I would not survive.
Now you understand why I'm afraid of her? It seems nothing unusual, a panda is like a panda. But. A saboteur, a hidden killer, and fate itself keeps her. How many times did she have to die? That's not all. Not all of her actions were recorded. For some time, and to be more precise since the moment of that sabotage, nothing was heard about her. I do not take into account my torture, I try not to think about it. And now... Again she.
If we let her reforge the blades. This will give the Horde a strong lead in our little conflict. But we can take advantage of her desire to remain anonymous. Lure her to That Worgen. Find out who he is...
I've heard of a worgen in Fozgorod who went from Druid to a Warrior. If this is him, then in case of our failure, he will be able to give her a worthy rebuff. I believe in that.
Now we need to revive our scout. And I beg you. Once we've done that, don't do anything else. If she can learn about our technologies, she will definitely have what it takes to create their counterparts.
Now let's go, we've got to go.
End. So. It's time to stop scribbling already. The secrets of fozgorod will be in a couple of weeks, most likely. I will spoil you with NSFW renders for now.
Tried to make the plot without holes. Although I think it's quite difficult for me. I like this damn it... It would be nice to learn how to write properly. Ahah
As always, thanks to those who are watching my work, you are the best.
Soft Used: Blender, WoW Model Viewier, WoW Export
Character belong's to me.
Pandaren race belong to Blizzard
Peace.
After joining the horde. She was offered to go on an expedition to the lost islands. She readily agreed. After all, there she could find her much-needed companions who could teach her something.
There were indeed such people on the expedition. Among these personalities were experienced rogue's. Many of them were well versed in poisons. They taught her how to make a hallucinogenic poison. And a poison that causes terrible torment, but does not kill. Taught her how to fight for real. Uncle Lu didn't teach her that. After all, he quickly realized who he was doing. Although she thought that he did not suspect what was happening to her.
On the same expedition, she was told about the Dreadblades. They said that where they sailed, it was possible that the blades were lost. And so it turned out. The blades ended up in one of the tombs, not far from the shore. Everyone rushed to explore it. However, she turned in the right direction and found them just lying on the floor. Taking them in hand. She heard screams. Running outside, she saw how all her companions began to rot alive, as if they were attacked by death knights. But... not a single death knight was on their team.
After a couple of moments, only skeletons remained around her. She stood and did not understand what had happened. All she could do was leave a sign on this island, "Go past if you want to live"
FuryRogue : The Dreadblades... One of the team members had a pistol, she took it. "There will be no excess".
The cadaverous smell slowly but surely filled her lungs and she began to lose consciousness. She lost consciousness. And I woke up a few days later, in one of the tents of a very hospitable city called "Fozgorod"
Enzis : Well milady, how do you feel?
She didn't know who it was in front of her. Wolf. She had heard of those. But the humanoid wolves were only in one place... rather, even in one faction.
Quickly catching "Last Breath" she held it to Worgen's throat with a question.
FuryRogue : Who the hell are you?
Enzis : The healer who saved your life! You were found on the beach surrounded by a whole bunch of skeletons.
She quickly ran out of the tent and saw a city that didn't even come close to Orgrimmar.
Enzis ran after her. She continued her conversation with him, standing with her back to him.
FuryRogue : Did you take off my mask? And where the hell am I?
Enzis : You are in Fozgorod. One of the cities of the Alliance.
FuryRogue : DID YOU TAKE OFF MY MASK?
Enzis : Yes.
FuryRogue : You'll regret it. But first. How can I get out of here?
Enzis : Through the gate, where are you going in this state?
FuryRogue : Away from you, stinking dog...
Enzis : Well, thank you, the first patient, and such compliments.
FuryRogue : Where are my blades?
Enzis : Blades in the tent. Tell me where you're going.
FuryRogue : Dream. Alliance dog.
Enzis : Ugliness. Get out of here! with your blades and everything you had there. The gate is north of here.
Taking her blades, she wanted this dog to rot like her comrades. But this didn't happen.
FuryRogue : Are you saying it's Fozgorod? I know where to start.
After leaving the city, she was already thinking about what to do with someone who saw her face. No one in the Alliance should know what she looks like. No one.
And Nobody knew. Until I got caught by her. The Colonel rolled up his left sleeve.
See these scars? This is her job. We found the same cuts on the corpse of our scout. One to One.
Fozgorod was hidden from the maps for a long time, the Horde did not know where it was. Until she was accidentally brought to this city. We have gathered in it our best healers.
Her first and biggest case was the sabotage in Fozgorod about 6 years ago.
During this sabotage, she wanted to get rid of the only living being that saw her face. It was then that her main skill appeared. Eloquence. She convinced everyone in the city that Anduin would be a terrible king, and eventually go completely insane.
It was a long and painstaking job. But she managed to start mass uprisings. Only 1 panda, and how much noise? How many actions. Her initiative could not be overlooked. In the ranks of the Horde, she could have received a very high rank, if it weren’t for... Wait, it’s funny to myself... If only she wasn't a panda.
It didn't upset her. After all, she received her own garrison after such a big deal. But that wasn't what she needed.
If she had not been discovered, she would have made the poor Healer suffer. The heal, the last survivor healer after all these uprisings.
The fozgorod guards began hunting her. And she had to run and hide.
Now with such influence. And opportunities. She had a dream. She wants to reforge her blades into Thunderfury. This can be done if you fulfill certain conditions, and collect everything you need.
One of the nights when it will rain heavily, she wants to fight with that worgen face to face.
Beautiful isn't it? In between torture, she told me about her dreams, I will never understand why she did this, apparently there is simply no one to communicate with. Or thought that I would not survive.
Now you understand why I'm afraid of her? It seems nothing unusual, a panda is like a panda. But. A saboteur, a hidden killer, and fate itself keeps her. How many times did she have to die? That's not all. Not all of her actions were recorded. For some time, and to be more precise since the moment of that sabotage, nothing was heard about her. I do not take into account my torture, I try not to think about it. And now... Again she.
If we let her reforge the blades. This will give the Horde a strong lead in our little conflict. But we can take advantage of her desire to remain anonymous. Lure her to That Worgen. Find out who he is...
I've heard of a worgen in Fozgorod who went from Druid to a Warrior. If this is him, then in case of our failure, he will be able to give her a worthy rebuff. I believe in that.
Now we need to revive our scout. And I beg you. Once we've done that, don't do anything else. If she can learn about our technologies, she will definitely have what it takes to create their counterparts.
Now let's go, we've got to go.
End. So. It's time to stop scribbling already. The secrets of fozgorod will be in a couple of weeks, most likely. I will spoil you with NSFW renders for now.
Tried to make the plot without holes. Although I think it's quite difficult for me. I like this damn it... It would be nice to learn how to write properly. Ahah
As always, thanks to those who are watching my work, you are the best.
Soft Used: Blender, WoW Model Viewier, WoW Export
Character belong's to me.
Pandaren race belong to Blizzard
Peace.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 720px
File Size 1.16 MB
Came here from the first work, in the second in order to finish reading. First, I want to praise the author of the text for the diligence with which you share your creativity, it was quite interesting to read it.
Let me just add my critical vision and offer a solution.
1. History of the beginning.
In the first text, I didn’t catch the essence a little, where does our girl herself come from, from the continent or the island? Too casually it is written and told.
As the history of the beginning, in my opinion, if we speak for the continental part of the population, then she is an excellent candidate. Pandaria became a victim of forced expansion, which even the local population did not sting and was generally unaware of what was happening. The factions forced the local population to work like slaves, forcing them to build military bases for them. In the war between factions and in Pandaria, it was the civilian population that suffered the most, from here the author can grow your legs. An example of the sheer hatred of an entire faction could be a dropped aerial bomb, or the fact that parents were herded into a labor camp, and so on. I didn't catch it in history.
2. The name of the main character.
Of course, you may not have imagined what her name could be, but I will say that the name Fen-Dan Zhi (Furious Warrior) will convey the flavor well.
3. Changing the nature of the character in a short time.
Very quickly, she decided on the first murder, because for some it can be an emotional barrier that interferes. If there are individuals who have committed a terrible thing, it is still important for the character to prepare yourself for the throw. I did not notice this, only I saw the story of a sick maniac.
4. Horde and their allies.
"She could be a general." Easy. When she took an oath before the Horde, she became part of the Horde and more than Huojin if she so desired. Here it would be interesting that with her violence, she would seek to get away from the faction and move along the path of hatred, but in the end she came to them again, killing her uncle and proving her loyalty. So the rank of captain might be comparable to Huojin's emissary, so you forgot.
Let me just add my critical vision and offer a solution.
1. History of the beginning.
In the first text, I didn’t catch the essence a little, where does our girl herself come from, from the continent or the island? Too casually it is written and told.
As the history of the beginning, in my opinion, if we speak for the continental part of the population, then she is an excellent candidate. Pandaria became a victim of forced expansion, which even the local population did not sting and was generally unaware of what was happening. The factions forced the local population to work like slaves, forcing them to build military bases for them. In the war between factions and in Pandaria, it was the civilian population that suffered the most, from here the author can grow your legs. An example of the sheer hatred of an entire faction could be a dropped aerial bomb, or the fact that parents were herded into a labor camp, and so on. I didn't catch it in history.
2. The name of the main character.
Of course, you may not have imagined what her name could be, but I will say that the name Fen-Dan Zhi (Furious Warrior) will convey the flavor well.
3. Changing the nature of the character in a short time.
Very quickly, she decided on the first murder, because for some it can be an emotional barrier that interferes. If there are individuals who have committed a terrible thing, it is still important for the character to prepare yourself for the throw. I did not notice this, only I saw the story of a sick maniac.
4. Horde and their allies.
"She could be a general." Easy. When she took an oath before the Horde, she became part of the Horde and more than Huojin if she so desired. Here it would be interesting that with her violence, she would seek to get away from the faction and move along the path of hatred, but in the end she came to them again, killing her uncle and proving her loyalty. So the rank of captain might be comparable to Huojin's emissary, so you forgot.
Criticism is good. Especially if the criticism is adequate. I allow you to criticize my scribbles! On the contrary, it is even welcomed. Without criticism, I will not be able to develop further in this direction.
In fact, I would explain everything to you almost up to this point. I just don't know English as well as necessary. And with the translator, some kind of mess is obtained from my answer. Since I also write a story with it, there may be holes in the plot that I simply don’t notice. I don't justify myself! I'm just telling it like it is. You pointed me to global errors. And I will fix them over time. Everything will become clear to the reader soon. Promise.
In fact, I would explain everything to you almost up to this point. I just don't know English as well as necessary. And with the translator, some kind of mess is obtained from my answer. Since I also write a story with it, there may be holes in the plot that I simply don’t notice. I don't justify myself! I'm just telling it like it is. You pointed me to global errors. And I will fix them over time. Everything will become clear to the reader soon. Promise.
I'm glad that there will be a continuation, perhaps then I will subscribe to updates here!
Speaking of the positions of, for example, the faction and the continental part, everything is complicated here. I will give you my vision, which has developed over several years of analysis, since everyone looks superficially.
The ideas of Huojin and Tushui, originally in their appearance on the continent, were associated with the traditions of the last Emperor Shao Hao. After a certain percentage left Pandaria on the turtle, the philosophy began to develop on its own and changed into something more radical. In its present form, the philosophy that we have known for 31 years since the opening of the Dark Portal is already fundamentally different from the original wisdom of Shao Hao.
So now there is Tushui. This pandaren philosophy teaches restraint and submissiveness, and that reason is their forte. But in order to achieve their goals, they become fanatics and will be close to the thought "if you are not with us, then you are against us." They are ready to kill for their idea. The leader of this 'sect' is currently led by Aisa Cloudsinger.
In the red corner, in the Horde, the idea of Huojin lives - the Philosophy of effectiveness and the call of the heart. They prefer improvisation to reason, and for that, they make many mistakes for which they then turn into assholes. Hypocrisy and achievement of goals, at any cost, setups and stab in the back, all in order to reach the goal. They are led by the most fucked up, the most important cuckold and rag Ji Firepaw. How many times his actions could in reality put a stone on the scales of balance, but he ruined the War of Thorns, and the fourth war, the revolution of Bane. Oh shit, I have such hatred and contempt internally. OF COURSE FUCK, WHERE IS IT MORE INTERESTING TO BEAT JI DINOSAUR FACES? Bitch, he doesn’t give a fuck that when they chose the Leader of the Horde, he sat on the sidelines as if it didn’t concern him at all.
In short, the main face of the Horde's factional pandaren is a dumb idiot. His subordinates are no worse. And when the assault took place for the second time, he ran away in fear, because OH I CAN BE Executed AGAIN. Well, yes, apparently what happened in BfA did not remind you of the experience when you could be left without a head?
In general, we will look. Subscribed and liked, you deserve it.
Speaking of the positions of, for example, the faction and the continental part, everything is complicated here. I will give you my vision, which has developed over several years of analysis, since everyone looks superficially.
The ideas of Huojin and Tushui, originally in their appearance on the continent, were associated with the traditions of the last Emperor Shao Hao. After a certain percentage left Pandaria on the turtle, the philosophy began to develop on its own and changed into something more radical. In its present form, the philosophy that we have known for 31 years since the opening of the Dark Portal is already fundamentally different from the original wisdom of Shao Hao.
So now there is Tushui. This pandaren philosophy teaches restraint and submissiveness, and that reason is their forte. But in order to achieve their goals, they become fanatics and will be close to the thought "if you are not with us, then you are against us." They are ready to kill for their idea. The leader of this 'sect' is currently led by Aisa Cloudsinger.
In the red corner, in the Horde, the idea of Huojin lives - the Philosophy of effectiveness and the call of the heart. They prefer improvisation to reason, and for that, they make many mistakes for which they then turn into assholes. Hypocrisy and achievement of goals, at any cost, setups and stab in the back, all in order to reach the goal. They are led by the most fucked up, the most important cuckold and rag Ji Firepaw. How many times his actions could in reality put a stone on the scales of balance, but he ruined the War of Thorns, and the fourth war, the revolution of Bane. Oh shit, I have such hatred and contempt internally. OF COURSE FUCK, WHERE IS IT MORE INTERESTING TO BEAT JI DINOSAUR FACES? Bitch, he doesn’t give a fuck that when they chose the Leader of the Horde, he sat on the sidelines as if it didn’t concern him at all.
In short, the main face of the Horde's factional pandaren is a dumb idiot. His subordinates are no worse. And when the assault took place for the second time, he ran away in fear, because OH I CAN BE Executed AGAIN. Well, yes, apparently what happened in BfA did not remind you of the experience when you could be left without a head?
In general, we will look. Subscribed and liked, you deserve it.
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