Commission for Sunrei on DA.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Lion
Size 1000 x 693px
File Size 419.3 kB
I've been looking through your gallery, and first off, let me start by saying that you're really good. Yet there's one problem I've noticed throughout a lot of your work. It seems that in a lot of your pictures, there's like, something small added in which steals attention from the rest of the picture and looks a bit out of place. I'd go through and comment on a bunch of your pictures, but I never know if people want critique or not, So I'll keep it all here, while pointing to a few of your pictures.
Starting off with this one, The whole background looks really lovely, and the characters do too. The clouds are lovely looking, and the ground looks great. My only issue is the rainbow. Rainbows generally occur when its been raining, and there's still moisture in the air. To which the arid landscape doesn't seem to fit, with the dry mud and the dry landscape behind them. So it looks a little out of place. Not bad, just out of place. While this is only really a minor criticism in this picture, I've noticed similar things in your other pictures.
Take http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4584492/ for example. Again, absolutely lovely picture. Dynamics on the picture are wonderful, poses and angle of the shot all work really well. And most importantly, as the wolf is getting thrown up into the air, it looks exactly like that's happening. However, the word "eep" looks awfully out of place. It looks really strange that its there, almost like someone has added it in afterwards. In my honest opinion? Even if the wolf can speak, (I'm new to your art and I don't know the stories behind your comics and characters, so they very well may be able to or not), it'd have looked better without it, as the picture describes perfectly what's going on. Again this is noticeable in http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4440323/ You are really good at expressions and conveying what the characters are going. I really think you should try and avoid "eep"s and such in pictures.
The final place I've noticed things looking off is in your commissions. Mostly when animals have really un-animalistic objects with them. I can't really comment on these, however as they're commissions, and obviously not your choice.
Anyway, Keep up what you're doing, as your art is looking great. Now if you don't mind me I'm going to go favourite some of these.
Starting off with this one, The whole background looks really lovely, and the characters do too. The clouds are lovely looking, and the ground looks great. My only issue is the rainbow. Rainbows generally occur when its been raining, and there's still moisture in the air. To which the arid landscape doesn't seem to fit, with the dry mud and the dry landscape behind them. So it looks a little out of place. Not bad, just out of place. While this is only really a minor criticism in this picture, I've noticed similar things in your other pictures.
Take http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4584492/ for example. Again, absolutely lovely picture. Dynamics on the picture are wonderful, poses and angle of the shot all work really well. And most importantly, as the wolf is getting thrown up into the air, it looks exactly like that's happening. However, the word "eep" looks awfully out of place. It looks really strange that its there, almost like someone has added it in afterwards. In my honest opinion? Even if the wolf can speak, (I'm new to your art and I don't know the stories behind your comics and characters, so they very well may be able to or not), it'd have looked better without it, as the picture describes perfectly what's going on. Again this is noticeable in http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4440323/ You are really good at expressions and conveying what the characters are going. I really think you should try and avoid "eep"s and such in pictures.
The final place I've noticed things looking off is in your commissions. Mostly when animals have really un-animalistic objects with them. I can't really comment on these, however as they're commissions, and obviously not your choice.
Anyway, Keep up what you're doing, as your art is looking great. Now if you don't mind me I'm going to go favourite some of these.
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