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The Silent killer

Part: 1

It was a cold night in the late autumn fall, coloured leaves keept falling from the trees as the wind grabbed them. This day it was october 31, 1982, and many childern and youth had already runned around saying trick or treat at every house they had been at, getting a lot of candy. But at some places around the old bars in this big old town men had been disappearing from time to time. It was not any good for the bars themself as they lost some of their best customers. The town was now quiet as most kids where at home eating candy or gooing to bed. The clock was around 23:50 as an police officer and his partner drived along a quiet streets where there had been happening quite many terrible things....
A sigh left his lips as he turned on the car radio to break the silent. “What kind of killer leaves almost nothing left of it's victims? Only bits of them are found here and there, but never a whole body is found.” he said as he stoped by at an old pub. "I dunno Jack, but it must be somebody who is doing it." Tony replied.
"I know, but still i can't stop thinking on it and who this psycho killer might be." Jack said as he looked out at the old pub. He looked around at it's sourrondings, trying to see if ther was anything strange with it before he finnaly turned the car off and steped out.
"Tony, you comeing?" he asked. "Yeah, im comeing!" Tony replied as he got out. They locked the car and walked towards the old pub. A bit away from there in an alley, some homeless personsthat was trying to get warm at a fire, looked suspicious at them both as they steped inside the old pub.
Well inside the place Jack and Tony notice that there was some few guests drinking, some was drunk others not. There was not much light in the room, since some of the lamps were broken, probaly because of a fight some nights ago jack guessed. They looked around in the room for a while before they finnaly sat down at the desk near the bartender.
“Anything to drink, sir?” the bartender asked as he looked at them both. Jack lifted his head slow, looked up at the bartender and answered: “No thanks, i don't drink while working, but i guess it wouldn't hurt to drink a glass whisky.” The bartender noded, filled a glass with whisky, dropped an ice cube in it and gave it to Jack. After that he contiuned with his work. Tony sat quiet next to Jack as he keept looking around at the others who were playing poker while drinking.
Jack sipped on his drink, and looked around in the room that was pretty quiet. “Maybe you could help me with something else that i could need some help with.” Jack said as he contiuned to look around in the room. “And what might that be, sir?” The bartender asked. “Please, call me jack. Im a bit tired of being called sir most of the time by others.” Jack said and looked at the bartender that was just cleaning a glass.
The bartender noded and asked: “So Jack, what brings you here on a night like this? Are you just tired, do you need to relax or could it be because of the all the murders and the body parts from men that have been found here and there on the ground.” Jack sighed before he answered: “...yes, but i have no clude who the killer might be and why there's only men that's been murdered so far and no womans.” The bartender lowered his head and whispered something in one of Jack's ear, Jack raised his eyebrows and stared at the bartender.
“A demon in a woman's skin?!” Jack brusted out, Tony turned his head towards his partner, as Jack contiuned: “You must be kidding me! Deamons doesn't exist! And how can it be walking around in a womans skin, killing men in dark alleys?” he asked, looking suspicious at the bartender.
But the bartender only ignored what the police had said and replied by saying: “Better stay inside at night time, if you don't wanna lose you're life, Jack. Some of my best customers have lost theirs while being drunk as they've started to walk back home alone in the dark. Somewhere on their way home they spot an woman that they follows into the darker alleys. And after that, no one ever sees them in life again.”
It was quiet for a while as Jack stared at the bartender, unsure if he was telling the true or not. Tony didn't know what to do or say, he just keept looking at them both, unsure what he should do. After a while the bartender said: “Believe me or not if you want, but it's out there, killing men.” Jack looked at the bartender a while before he got up and walked out from the pub. Tony decided to stay a little while to pay for his partners drink that still was on the desk, unfinished. "Here you got, sir." Tony said and gave some money to the man before he walked after his partner that was at the car. Just as Jack was about to open the car door, he notice a person standing in the shadows of an building.



To be contiuned...

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Im not one of the best writers, but any constructive criticism is welcomed.

Hello  ZombieD i hope you will like the beginning, before anyone get's killed. Also i still need to figure out what should happen in part 2, so if anyone got any idea, you can tell me about it and i might use it to make the 2nd part a bit longer

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Constructive criticism is welcomed