That's pretty good :) how big be the dragon?

SP

I am not completely sure but I would say bigger than your garden variety dragon.

*nods this is going to look really good once coloured :)

SP

Great work on that pose. Airplane needs to slow down a bit.

Hehe, but where is the fun in trying to catch it

Its shiny, and its moving fast! Best snap it up quick before it gets away. :D

No problem boss. Sometimes the best food is delivered in shiny containers.

Aye, they keep the heat in. :3

I like! And I furthermore look forward to seeing the coloured version! :)

It is looking good this early stages but the city is going to take some time to do.

Nice perspective and size difference :D

Thank you kindly ^^

Quite welcome ^_^

They're getting away!

Not for long

*Particle Beam Nails Plane* *Plane Crashes* There You Go, A Nice Little Snack.

O.O Nuuu, now I don't have anything to chase and devour.

Oh, Sorry. *Alvatore Hovers By* You Could Chase My Mobile Armor. Its Gold And Very Shiny.

scraps? are you kidding? this is worth color, i love every bit of it, granted the city below doesn't need too much work or detail. but it looks awesome. wish i was on that plane x3

I don't know if you would still want to be after he has swallowed it.

oh yes, im sure i would

*snickers* get em big bro <3 just careful where you sits now haha

*Settles down on the city* Oops

Great sense of perspective on the dragon. The city? Not so much. I love the subject and the concept though. Planes is fun to chase! <3

Thank you very much for the comments. Please can you tell me what you feel would improve the perspective of the city?

I feel planes are both fun to chase and tasty too.

Perspective is a pretty spiffy trick. Two Point Perspective is rather easy to understand and to implement as well. Simply pick two points on the horizon, and then all the lines of the buildings point directly at them. Here's sort of an example I did for school recently that... well, I had some fun with as well:

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1687546/

Also most of my pieces have some sort of perspective practice with degrees of success. A search here for 'Tyrnn perspective' comes up with a lot of macro art with perspective in mind.

Hope this helps!

Thank you very much for the reference. I have made some changes to the picture and it does look a lot better. I should have not rushed it and drawn without the construction lines especially since perspective makes up for much of my macro works.

whille I think the picture is awesome, I must say you didn't quite nail the perspective side. For one thing, givven how large this dragon is I think the perspective would dictate he would have the head much smaller then you drew it. I have a fealling that if you viewed him from the side his head and chest would be much larger then his butt sort of speak.

As for the city... again, it looks more like an isometricview ( the kind you saw in oldschool RTS or RPG games ( like age of empiers or diablo ) basicly showing buildings to their real size without any perspective deformation.

You should try building a perspective mroe accuratelly.

Though I do hope this dosen't demoralise or fofend you, I really like the way the pic looks... it just dosen't nail the concepts quite right.

Oh and planes are fun indeed.

For a picture that relied so heavily on perspective to give the impression of size, I have to agree with you that it is a little shoddy. I have honestly not drawn any perspective and it shows. I have been remedying some of that in Photoshop as I am colouring. Already I have deleted all the buildings and have worked some perspective lines into it.

I will also enlarge the rear end to match the rest of the angle as I am colouring it. Hopefully the final coloured version will be much better.

Thank you so much for the critism, I am happy to have received some so do not feel bad for that.

It's funny, I was able to do a preatty decent perspective back when I did it on paper... the best example I can give is the following:

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2749553/

Yeah I know it dosen't look like much now, but I am still proud of the actual cityscape even today. It was made on paper with nothing more then a ruler and a mech pencill but I remember I did the actual grid first then just started filling out each hex. Was peoud of the result.

Saddly when I ported to photoshop and the digital medium I was no longer able to do such precice perspectives. Photoshop isn't very friendly for such things.

But the point is that I'm loking forward to the revised versione of this image. Good luck.

Thank you very much for the help, I have made the head smaller and the chest has been shrunk a little too. The city also has been fixed and Meanbean has also suggested using vapour trails from the plane to help.

Once more, thanks for the advice and I do look forward to showing you the finished piece.

We dragons are very sporting creatures. Besides, they are more fun to chase then.

Don't think I helped much but thanks, hope you come up with an awesome drawing ( but then again I know you will. )

Oh and the vapore traills will defenetly add to the dynamics of the image. Very good suggestion.

woah! Nice job! :D

Thank you kindly

I would love to see a finished version of this picture.