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What are you supposed to do when you're born in a world of magic and wonder, unable to do the simplest magic.
For one boy, a lucky encounter saved him from selling himself off as a common item.
But not everyone is quite that lucky....
Hey there everyone, Big shoutout to
Noel Evans He was the Co-author for this story with me, and this tale is all thanks to him. He was the one who came up with the idea of wanting to see what might happen to others who might not have magic. And from there, he and I created this, and a few other stories that will be showing up in the next few days. Make sure you leave a comment and tell him what you think. This is the first story he has ever posted to FA, and I really want him to know just how great of a gift he has in writing.
Otherwise, like always, thank you for reading the story and I hope you enjoy it. Me and Gin worked really hard on it. And we will see you in the next tale.
For one boy, a lucky encounter saved him from selling himself off as a common item.
But not everyone is quite that lucky....
Hey there everyone, Big shoutout to
Noel Evans He was the Co-author for this story with me, and this tale is all thanks to him. He was the one who came up with the idea of wanting to see what might happen to others who might not have magic. And from there, he and I created this, and a few other stories that will be showing up in the next few days. Make sure you leave a comment and tell him what you think. This is the first story he has ever posted to FA, and I really want him to know just how great of a gift he has in writing. Otherwise, like always, thank you for reading the story and I hope you enjoy it. Me and Gin worked really hard on it. And we will see you in the next tale.
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Interesting work. Tragic. And without an egotistical sociopath hunting down those who can't defend themselves. Interesting to indeed have a 'conscious object story from you. This isn't a perfect ending, this a tragedy and learning to be stronger than it is. Being better than it is. Artistic.
As someone who has contemplated suicide on the daily for about 3 years now, I secretly saved this story. The amount of pain one rash and greedy choice one can do, shows that a few hurtful words are not a far fall from mental damnation. This story cuts me deep, I read it when ever death truly feels on the mind to remember those close to me will miss me. A burning goes in my heart as it sinks like lead towards the end of the story, but even then, nothing is truly permanent, even the harshest thoughts can be unwound by the smallest drop of rain, I don't find a permanent title as reliable thusly. There is a way to undo everything, even death, just no one has found it yet. Such a painful read, but I would love to see this story continue as death does more than this, and one broken heart can break so many more of left unchecked for long. I would love to see a story of the father going through hell and back doing regretful things to get their son back, even if it isn't fully normal. After all we all know and count are scars. I would love a story of this father being the world down to bring back one person just to get a chance to apologize, it would should that even with a bad ending, it can always get worse. Anyway story ideas aside, sad story, love it though I am biased, but such a rollercoaster of pain that ends on a hopeful note with no full promise of anything after it.
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