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Heh, looks like Ramin knew that Liz existed after all. :3

A little fun fact, in the original, Ramin actually thought something along the lines of "Wow, I've been hit by an angel" and had a smirk on his face. He was originally something of a charming covert pervert; and he still kinda is.

But as I wrote him more he became more compassionate and fumbled more than he scored. I suppose that's part of what makes him endearing to Liz, though. x3 Sometimes characters just jump into their own personalities the more you develop them.

Also, in the original, Laan had used a rock to knock Liz out of the tree instead of having a vine grab her leg, and he was more dramatic about it. =p Man, I'm glad I re-wrote this intro.