*sagenod*

Sound advice~ Soft poem (in a good way). ^^ Ever hear of the darkwave band Lycia?

Thank you.

No I haven't heard of them, do you have a you have a youtube link?

Lycia: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tTF1jznxuBc

Not their happiest song but it is one of my favourite. XD

Welcome. ^^ You seem like a very in-tune person.

Very nice, mellow and dark, I enjoyed it. Thank you for the link.

Music often helps me write my poetry the one I was listening to when writing this one was Damaged by Assemblage 23.

Cool. ^^ I haven't been dissapointed by em yet.

I do too. ^^

Damaged by Assemblage 22?

One of my favorite bands and songs, here is the song damaged if your interested: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GffuI0BsYVc

Nice write up! The repetition really carries the poem to the end.

Thank you, I've been experimenting in variations on my style.

My technique does seem to be improving.

By exploration and practice, we can only get better. =) by the way, you're poem made me think of a song by Quiet Riot, Let you Go, I think was the title, I've had it stuck in my head all day (not a bad thing, since I think it's a pretty listen-able song).

Quiet Riot - Let You Go

There's the link to it if you're interested. It's a live acoustic version (though the vocalist is no longer alive, I saw them on their last tour).

-Weasel

Good song, not my standard style of music but I'm not one to pass up any song that sounds good no matter the style

Neither am I, =)

Very nicely done.

Thank you for your enjoyment.