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The day is coming to an end and Noelle Glöckner, employee of the Stalwart Basilisk: Hobbies & Games Shop, is closing up when her long time friend Omen appears.
Noelle Glöckner and Omen Vermes ©
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Noelle Glöckner and Omen Vermes ©
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Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Rat
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 92.7 kB
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Nothing like a good ol' pizza binge! The card game action did a lot to color their relationship without getting in the way, too--I thought you struck a nice balance.
Just a minor note: semicolons separate independent clauses. So, each half should work as its own sentence.
Anyway, thank you for sharing this!
Just a minor note: semicolons separate independent clauses. So, each half should work as its own sentence.
Anyway, thank you for sharing this!
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