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Well, here's the second instalment which in my mind was the hardest to write. Now, I'm still trying to do the whole 'written in a first person narrative' and distinctly leave things out because no one can remember everything and hopefully give some foreshadowing.
Now, we get to meet the father and the children, the children not so much because they are in trouble for thawing the poor kid. The father I hope to evolve into someone more interesting later on.
The next part I'm glad to say is going to have our hero walk into the 'wide' satlite world the Carnely's live in.
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Now, we get to meet the father and the children, the children not so much because they are in trouble for thawing the poor kid. The father I hope to evolve into someone more interesting later on.
The next part I'm glad to say is going to have our hero walk into the 'wide' satlite world the Carnely's live in.
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Category Story / Fat Furs
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File Size 11 kB
I thank you for the advice, I will defenantly try that on the next part. (Even though I'm bound to continue with the grammar errors, they are my kryptonite)
I'm glad someone actually reads this, I thought that people wouldn't read it because it contains fat furs but no weight gain or other 'adult' stuff.
I'm glad someone actually reads this, I thought that people wouldn't read it because it contains fat furs but no weight gain or other 'adult' stuff.
Side note: If you wanted to include some weight gain, you have a good justification. As our astronauts would tell you, living where everything is much lighter causes the muscles to weaken unless you exercise like crazy; combine that with the overwhelming portion sizes of his hosts, and it wouldn't be hard for him to put on weight.
Unless you're using "Superman doesn't get fat" rules, of course.
Unless you're using "Superman doesn't get fat" rules, of course.
Oh yes, I'm not going to put 'much' weight gain in there though, and it's defenantly not going to be the center of it. Besides, we also see that the food also helps them with their size overall, more specifically how tall they are.
Though, we are also giving Robert some 'handycaps' so that he doesn't accadentally hop to the roof.
Though, we are also giving Robert some 'handycaps' so that he doesn't accadentally hop to the roof.
Yah, later in the story we are going to see some 'immobles' who, even at this state of decreased gravity, cannot get out of bed and basically live a 'digital' life. We also see some furs who are considered a little 'strange', like walking for fun.
(I also want to put some cameo's of my favorite fat fur artists in the story, but I don't know if I could get 'character rights' for such a rough draft story)
(I also want to put some cameo's of my favorite fat fur artists in the story, but I don't know if I could get 'character rights' for such a rough draft story)
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