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If only Mitz would listen! Poor guy is nothing but cow shit and milk now! I'm sure Dallas can't wait until Mitz reforms so he can laugh at him for managing to fall victim to a cow of all things.
This is the first short story I've ever published here. I'm excited to know how you guys like it!
This is the first short story I've ever published here. I'm excited to know how you guys like it!
Category Story / Vore
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 6.2 kB
The vore is well written and nicely detailed, but the story fails to mention what rule Mitz broke to earn a trip through the cow. The story itself also doesn’t mention there’ll be reformation involved, I was happy to notice that in the description. Oh, and with .txt files it’s a good idea to add an extra line between paragraphs, helps break the solid block of text to manageable pieces.
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