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Yap i suck at body and poses thats why i wanted to practice a bit^^ i know that some or all have mistakes but i was drawing them from my head, widouth ref its harder XP
So yeah, it would be nice to get some criticque on them even if they are just doodles ^^" I also hope that they migh help some of you ;)
Next time i will try MANS! more fail than woman hehe |D
So yeah, it would be nice to get some criticque on them even if they are just doodles ^^" I also hope that they migh help some of you ;)
Next time i will try MANS! more fail than woman hehe |D
Category Artwork (Digital) / Doodle
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 1011 x 1280px
File Size 168.6 kB
critique XP
though I preface with, "I'm not an artist, so try not to take my critique too seriously"
that said, starting at the bottom
bottom most doodle:
The head positioning with the neck looks a bit awkward... I base that statement off of me trying to position my head and neck like so on my shoulder, and ending up looking in a completely odd direction XP
Light blue doodle:
I like this one, the only thing I think that might be slightly off, is the hand, maybe try rotating it a little further back, (fingers pointing a little further away from the viewer's point of view XD)
light red/pink doodle:
it feels like two different poses mixed into one, it's accurate and doable, but kinda funky...
when you a person lay on there arm like that typically the rest of them would be on it's side too
or when you have your legs like that and you're arching your back, you tend to be fully horizontal and not rotated... I dunno just seems like two separate poses to me *shrugs*
Purple doodle:
really like this one, but the finger on that hand...
try putting the two middle fingers (exclude thumb to find middle fingers XP) a little closer together, and I think it would work ^^
Yellow doodle:
this one is most excellent, the only thing you could possibly do to it is maybe have a little bit of arch to the back... but that's optional XP
Dark blue doodle:
another good one, but arching your hands like that when leaning that way, is way awkward XP maybe lay the arms flat instead?
Dark green doodle:
mmm I dunno, I like this one, can't see any real issues here XP
there's your critque XP don't expect me to do the same for the males especially if there will be penii (penis plural XP) involved...
though I preface with, "I'm not an artist, so try not to take my critique too seriously"
that said, starting at the bottom
bottom most doodle:
The head positioning with the neck looks a bit awkward... I base that statement off of me trying to position my head and neck like so on my shoulder, and ending up looking in a completely odd direction XP
Light blue doodle:
I like this one, the only thing I think that might be slightly off, is the hand, maybe try rotating it a little further back, (fingers pointing a little further away from the viewer's point of view XD)
light red/pink doodle:
it feels like two different poses mixed into one, it's accurate and doable, but kinda funky...
when you a person lay on there arm like that typically the rest of them would be on it's side too
or when you have your legs like that and you're arching your back, you tend to be fully horizontal and not rotated... I dunno just seems like two separate poses to me *shrugs*
Purple doodle:
really like this one, but the finger on that hand...
try putting the two middle fingers (exclude thumb to find middle fingers XP) a little closer together, and I think it would work ^^
Yellow doodle:
this one is most excellent, the only thing you could possibly do to it is maybe have a little bit of arch to the back... but that's optional XP
Dark blue doodle:
another good one, but arching your hands like that when leaning that way, is way awkward XP maybe lay the arms flat instead?
Dark green doodle:
mmm I dunno, I like this one, can't see any real issues here XP
there's your critque XP don't expect me to do the same for the males especially if there will be penii (penis plural XP) involved...
every suggestion is good :D
Its possible thet i drew the chin too much up so the neck is also looking weird XD dont forget that i was drawing from my head only XDDDDD
I will remember for the next time ;)
The red one is a bit in perspective, some of them also :P she has legs in spread and feet are going a bit into middle, i know that its weird pose xD
okay :D
oh XD
I think that it makes the pose more smexy but okay XD (love weird poses) XD
hehe XD this one was 1st haha
thank you for the criticque it really helped me ;) haha no, i wont be drawing them , just like on biological images (widouth) XDDDD
Its possible thet i drew the chin too much up so the neck is also looking weird XD dont forget that i was drawing from my head only XDDDDD
I will remember for the next time ;)
The red one is a bit in perspective, some of them also :P she has legs in spread and feet are going a bit into middle, i know that its weird pose xD
okay :D
oh XD
I think that it makes the pose more smexy but okay XD (love weird poses) XD
hehe XD this one was 1st haha
thank you for the criticque it really helped me ;) haha no, i wont be drawing them , just like on biological images (widouth) XDDDD
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