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Maaaannn what a time to have lost my net.
Well, atleast I'm back.
AND I COME BEARING FRUIT, AND THAT FRUIT IS THIS DRAWING.
... A drawing of which much love was put into, lovingly.
*checks messages*
=_=
*picks up shovel*
This will take a while.
Do enjoy!
It seems that I should also mention their names.
So I think I will:
Fox = Hana
bull = Bull
Bear = Bruno
wolf = Garou
Lion = Jupiter
Porcupine = Rosso
Also:
Thanks in advance for the faves.
And comments are much appreciated.
Well, atleast I'm back.
AND I COME BEARING FRUIT, AND THAT FRUIT IS THIS DRAWING.
... A drawing of which much love was put into, lovingly.
*checks messages*
=_=
*picks up shovel*
This will take a while.
Do enjoy!
It seems that I should also mention their names.
So I think I will:
Fox = Hana
bull = Bull
Bear = Bruno
wolf = Garou
Lion = Jupiter
Porcupine = Rosso
Also:
Thanks in advance for the faves.
And comments are much appreciated.
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 800px
File Size 738.9 kB
Hana: ...
Bruno: Awesome, closest to the camera and still looking kickass!!!
Garou: A true warrior needs no vanity (I hope he's getting my good side)
Bull: Do I really have to do this?...
Rosso: Oh man oh man, did the camera snap yet? Holding this position is killing my fingers!
Jupiter: Oh crap, I'm in the front... what pose what pose!? Hmmm... laid-back style wielding with a badass stair forward?... Guess this'll do!
Aldus: HEY HEY!? WHY AM I NOT IN HERE!?
Alice: You're too dirty to put in there
Adrian: (No he's too hot...) I'm not in there too
Alex: Ohhhh! Adrian-sempai!
Bruno: Awesome, closest to the camera and still looking kickass!!!
Garou: A true warrior needs no vanity (I hope he's getting my good side)
Bull: Do I really have to do this?...
Rosso: Oh man oh man, did the camera snap yet? Holding this position is killing my fingers!
Jupiter: Oh crap, I'm in the front... what pose what pose!? Hmmm... laid-back style wielding with a badass stair forward?... Guess this'll do!
Aldus: HEY HEY!? WHY AM I NOT IN HERE!?
Alice: You're too dirty to put in there
Adrian: (No he's too hot...) I'm not in there too
Alex: Ohhhh! Adrian-sempai!
hmm.... I'll do my best to crit this properly...
the lines are very smooth and clean in your piece. The composition flows very well, in regards to the character placement. Very simple conceptually, but somewhat difficult to pull off. I seriously have nothing to say on the characters and how they are drawn.... though there is one thing: the black in the girl's hair is really strong. like black hole strong. compared to the color schemes of the other characters, which had mostly midtones, and unsaturated colors, that hair just unbalances the bic a little. Maybe give her a not so pure shade of black....closer to very dark gray, rather than the blackest black .
though i like the splatter paint-ish background and the complimentary colors, that orange and blue might come off as a little distracting...... the bg, like the girls hair have a high contrast to the other characters. might wanna tone it down just a bit....
or i just hate bright colors XD
hope this helps ^^;
the lines are very smooth and clean in your piece. The composition flows very well, in regards to the character placement. Very simple conceptually, but somewhat difficult to pull off. I seriously have nothing to say on the characters and how they are drawn.... though there is one thing: the black in the girl's hair is really strong. like black hole strong. compared to the color schemes of the other characters, which had mostly midtones, and unsaturated colors, that hair just unbalances the bic a little. Maybe give her a not so pure shade of black....closer to very dark gray, rather than the blackest black .
though i like the splatter paint-ish background and the complimentary colors, that orange and blue might come off as a little distracting...... the bg, like the girls hair have a high contrast to the other characters. might wanna tone it down just a bit....
or i just hate bright colors XD
hope this helps ^^;
Mmmmwell, my biggest concern is the flat colors. Don't get me wrong, I think it looks good, and it is a legitimate style choice, but something about it just doesn't sit perfectly. It's a very minimalistic style as far as details; apart from just being huge, there isn't a whole lot of muscle definition, and the greatest level of real detail I see is in the creases of the characters' clothing.
Also, I have a problem with the hands, specifically the ones holding the sword and kunai and the one in the extreme foreground. . The ones holding those weapons look just a little too thin, and it seems they don't close around their respective weapons all the way, like the sword could just slip out at any moment. the hand in the front.. I dunno why, but it just looks off to me.
Hope this is helpful
Also, I have a problem with the hands, specifically the ones holding the sword and kunai and the one in the extreme foreground. . The ones holding those weapons look just a little too thin, and it seems they don't close around their respective weapons all the way, like the sword could just slip out at any moment. the hand in the front.. I dunno why, but it just looks off to me.
Hope this is helpful
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