Just purely excellent till 1:48, I felt such caravan palace /syd matters vibes, great work.

Yet:

What made me squint my eyes later on was heavy reverbed electronic sound and ticky percussion cuz they added sound variation, but it missed that vibe.

Shaker was good, sounded very natural.

Bass drowned it all, just bashed door open not something you wish for here, also that ticking is out of place.

Very abrupt ending, better go with fade out

okay i just posted this to see what the effect was. but thanks for the feed back!

I mean you do great stuff, from what I hear keep it up)

okay! *confidence up!🔺*