Your wip sounds really amazing :3
i like and fav it ^^

Ho mai gawd, I just got a fave from a European Music Maker... O__________________o
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Thank you Zuelo! I'll be sure to let you know when the piece is entirely finished. ^^
Do you have any suggestions to make that would improve this piece?

I really like it, and OMG, i actually have a criticism for you! xD i think that the piano piece has a kind of slower, more peaceful air about it, and the trance part seems a little too upbeat to go with the piano. But that's just what one folf says. Hope this helps :3

Actually, I was going for a clash; Opposing energies and forces.

It shows what can be done with any melody, and shows how sound and light editing can produce something entirely different. ^^
But, do you think there's too much of a gap?

If the difference is what you're going for, then i think it's great! I was just saying that there is a difference basically, and you got it right haha

... Contrast!! That's the word that i was looking for. ^^
Thank you very much. ^^

Hahahah, Well there you go :D

I can't really criticize this piece but only a comment. I can only say is that it sound very good. so keep up the good work. I willing to hear the rest of this piece when it's finish.

Well, thank you Brox!! ^^

Oh, and the fave is adored as well!! ^^

your welcome, and no problem. ^^

It's intaresting now that i listen to it more closly, and there is a diffrence when its heard by ears or with head phones.

It appears a bit 'unfinished', but also deserves +fav anyway -

Eh, sorry, it is a WIP XD So it is great in my opinion (play count = 4 so far :P )

Awesome sauce!! ^^

Thanks Leo. x3

I like the clever contrast between the mellow, downbeat piano sections and the happy up-tempo trance , it blrnds quite well together. My thoughts are to maybe continue from where you are by using the piano sections as bridges between the dance sections, I'm thinking three, including the first one, maybe making each one a bit longer, or more dramatically developed with a pad backing, or if you're feeling ambitious, a more complex piano section. Also try to work to build a crescendo as you go on, if you can make the dance section towards the end more euphoric with an extra layer of pad chords and/or an accompanying slow melody, then this could potentially be a fantastic track. Maybe even finish on a final piano section at the close of the track, taking it back to its base form at the start and going out on a quiet note.

Hope this has helped, and sorry it took me so long to reply, connection's been deathly slow the past few days so I've been keeping off FA until it showed signs of improvement. Good luck with the rest of your work! :)

Sooo many good ideas at once... @_@

If only my little 1.8ghz processor could handle more intense stuff like what you have envisioned.
I could definitely see a more complex piano section somewhere in the midst of the song, with lots of pretty pads, and ambiance.
Adding more pads to the piece toward the end would be fucking stellar. Unfortunately, With what little processing power I have, It's going to be exceedingly tricky to even begin to pull off. I'm already running my processor at max capacity with what I already have...

I will try my best to put what you have envisioned into effect though: I've needed some good ideas along these lines for awhile, and I'm not about to let processing power stand in my way. Thanks again for taking a listen to this!! ^^

No problem at all. Good luck with your project, and do what you do best. ^^