Interesting. :) She sounds like a real catch.

i c what u did ther

i r an engineeer :nerd:

That's a fabulous vignette. I want to read more of your writing.

Thanks, I'll post some other things from time to time, then.

Very nice.
I liked this line the best: "Each wave licked at her feet, and then just as quickly receeded, slipping back to join the others." That was a wonderful little personification there. :)

thank you

I've done the bit towards the end to my boyfriend before, except that I ran through a series of fountains and not into the ocean. In public. Whoops. He reacted pretty much the same way, poor guy. :|;

There's something about your writing style that's very pleasant, but I'm not sure I can put my finger on it. But this is certainly my favorite line: And he would have said lamely, "Here, I'll hold your clothes so they don't get sandy." All in all, it's a nice contrast, even without telling us anything about their relationship: their actions speak for themselves, and illustrate their personalities wonderfully.

Now I'm curious about where this fits in with the rest of it!

Ha! wonderful!

I have two other fragments with these characters. The three scenes are spaced throughout the book.