Pretty decent, pretty decent! :3

This is so quirky and empty, I can't help but like it. XD I'm really glad that you kept the drum rhythm changing more than the standard 4 measure loop, helps keep it interesting throughout.

My suggestions (If you're open to such) would be to as some background noise/samples under some of your snare fill sections (the one at 1:21 in particular seemed to drag on a bit because it's doubled and nothing is changing) Maybe something like a turn table scratching sequence, or like some old film chatter. Also, I would question in the break at 2:30 actually helps the song.

Unique and good, I like it. You've got my fave. :D

thank you! i'm always open to advice because i have loads to learn still, i definitely could have found some kind of arpeggiator to throw in the snare fills i was just bein kinda lazy but i also like to give parts that need to have good lyrics because so many beats cover up how horrible an artists singing or rapping is haha, and i wanted to throw in that break to build up to the last repetition of the hook, and i thought if were to write something for this i'd feature somebody on that part or do something kind of obscure there, but i can see how its kind of abrupt by itself. Thanks for the advice!

nice music

oh i definitely wouldnt mind that would be cool as hell!