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Inspired by the phrase "I shall die with your name on my lips."
Just a piece of work relevant to my current state of mind. Enjoy.
Just a piece of work relevant to my current state of mind. Enjoy.
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 603 B
The final quatrain undoubtedly embodies the underlying emotion of the poem, Scier! =O
It's a very strong summation; you should be quite proud of it. ^^
Also, you pulled off the iambic tetrameter rather nicely, as you did the more difficult (abab) rhyme scheme; it's...really not easy keeping up with that particular format, but it's lovely when done with correlative rhymes! :3
It's a very strong summation; you should be quite proud of it. ^^
Also, you pulled off the iambic tetrameter rather nicely, as you did the more difficult (abab) rhyme scheme; it's...really not easy keeping up with that particular format, but it's lovely when done with correlative rhymes! :3
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