nd another one that needs critiques xD animal experts help me!

well I´ve been having the idea of making a webcomic for hal a year now and I think is time to start making the references for the characters, a few days ago I thought that some of the characters should have feral versions of themselves and Dokken was the first one that came up to my mind, he´s a lion-bear mix, and I wanted the lion to be dominant but I think I need to make some changes.

I am doing this and sketches of the feathered jaguar between my school works and comissions lol