A smallish ad I'm considering placing in the conbook.

It's not as big as the previous B&W ad I made last year, and it doesn't have a coupon I can use to help track response, but it seems like a pretty reasonable, powerful piece. Much tighter, much easier to explain the plot, etc.

If anyone has any ideas to improve it, I'm all ears. Granted, those ears will be busy with the start of school, but...