In my completely, totally unbiased opinion, of course! Excellent work, Mellie! :D

Heheh thanks!

It may be late, but I said I'd let you know what I think so here we go! May as well be detailed, right? Heh heh!

You nailed all of the markings I had originally intended, so that worked out extremely well!I thought the placement of a few of them would be difficult but I think you nailed it all! I was a bit worried since I thought I made it a bit too complicated, but you handled it magnificently! The music-related touches were excellent as well, from the 8th note on the name to the MP3 player/earbuds. Magnificent pose, but you do some outstanding ones every time so that didn't come as much of a surprise. Cute little heart on the pillow as well, very nice touch!

Now, the only thing that throws me a bit off is the tail. Before I get into it, the markings on there are excellent, so the style itself is right there. Given the pose it looks a bit awkward that it's being being dragged downwards towards an unseen floor, it might have been better if it was looped in-between and behind his legs. Then again, that would have made it more difficult to see overall, so I can understand the aesthetic choice! The tail also seems a little bit too thick closer to the base and too thin a bit too early at the tip, but that's just personal preference on my end.

Quite frankly, I love the hell out of this one, Mellie. You did an amazing job. :D

^-^ glad you liked it overall, and that you were honest about what was iffy for ya :)

Well, I adore the picture to no end, there is no doubt about that in the slightest! You asked for a critique and I have to give an honest one, despite the fact that I'm going to be heavily biased and all for numerous reasons, heh heh! ;D

Even still, the parts I'm iffy about were still ridiculously minor compared to the rest of the piece as a whole. You knocked it out of the park, Mellie, and you should be as proud as I am happy!

^-^ I us proud o' m'self :D