Here's Chapter Two in the comments again because it's much, much easier to edit lol
And link to Chapter One http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4303113
_____Chapter Two_____
He awoke again and this time he was laying on his back staring into white lights. He could feel the cold steel pressing into his back and straps everywhere to bind him down. But even though he could hear people talking...he couldn't understand them.
Then a large face appeared above his own and he jumped. The figure laughed inside his helmet saying something to his colleges. He lifted a needle that looked to be around seven inches long and held it up for Tom to see.
Then he felt it slammed into his neck. A burning sensation shot through his neck like a shock-wave. He yelled out but found he was muzzled again and couldn't scream. The pain was blinding but still more were now being injected everywhere. His legs and his arms and his chest. His lower regions were being stabbed now. Tears leaked out as he just tried to relax as the burning spread through his body trying to remember where he was last.
________
Tom was leaving the house now, heading to a friends house first and then over to the recruiting station. About five others were going to sign up for for the Army as well. It was only a few blocks away till he was at Mark's house.
He ran out to meet him and they shook hands.
“Nice to see you again Tom.” Mark said smiling. “Are you ready to go and kick some ass?”
“You know they're not going to ship us out right away Mark.” Tom said as they walked to Mark's car. “They are going to put us through training and all sorts of other stuff.”
“Yes but I like to dream! Which way is it to Megan's?”
“You should know by now.” Tom said smiling.
“Hey! We were both drunk...and it just happened.”
“You go up here at the four way...and take a left.”
_______
He was coming to now. Someone was over him trying to tap his face lightly. Voices were swimming around him and so were the faces. Then he was helped to sit up and he looked around. He was back in the room with the friendly faces of Phillip, Joey, Brian and Pete.
Everyone was smiling and giggling at Tom. He shook his head back to normal and then looked at them. “Why are you all giggling? I just went through a traumatic experience...”
Joey pointed at Tom and he looked down. Wrapped around his waist was a large fluffy white diaper. That was the only thing he had on.
“Ah!”
“Don't worry about it Tom.” Pete said shrugging. “The first time they inject you...you usually don't lose control...but you don't see any toilets in here do you?”
Tom looked around splaying his ears back. There wasn't anything like a toilet in the room. Except for the thing he was sitting in.
Pete came over and sat by him. “It's okay Tom...the first time as I said...is embarrassing...but the next time they do that to you...you most likely won't have any control over your bathroom abilities. Thing is though...you and I have to worry about changing the others...” He smirked. “Not very fun.”
“We're sitting right here!” Joey yelled crossing his arms. “Besides...you've not had the cleanest diapers either!”
Tom was feeling sick to his stomach and gripped it. He didn't want to be changing anyone's diapers, let alone...his own.
“What about privacy? We don't get that to change?”
“We're all boys.” Phillip said looking up. “All got the same bits. Once a day they bring in a pale for the older cubs and for us. To change. Then they give us food and something to drink. But otherwise we stay in here.”
“Why do they wear those suites though?”
“Well...I think that we have some sort of excess drifting off us...kind of like radiation. But not. If they get exposed to it...they might start to get younger too. And they don't want that.” Pete said bringing his knees to his chest and sighing.
“What about sleep?”
“In here. Everyone sleeps and does everything in this room.” Phillip said again. “Only thing we don't do in here is the experiments. But I think Joey and myself...are pretty much done for testing. We're growing younger on our own now. He's around five now...and I'm...”
He paused trying to think looking at himself. “Um...I am....four I think? Anyway the point is they're goal is to get you to regress on your own...and I've been regressing the past day or so on my own. They just like to do small tests on us to make sure we haven't stopped regressing or haven't started growing.”
“What about-”
“The smell?” Joey cut in grinning. Apparently nothing they were talking about bothered him. Or perhaps it did but he was just the kind of person to try and look on the bright side. He pointed up at the padded walls. “They have a special material...that draws our stenches away from the room. Don't know how it works.”
Someone banged on the door and the lights above them went out. “Lights out!” a rough voice said. They walked away.
“They expect us to sleep?” Tom asked looking at the door.
“Yes...if we don't sleep...or rest...they punish us.” Pete said laying down on the soft material.
Joey leaned over grabbing something and stuffed it into his mouth and then laid down looking up at the ceiling. He mumbled something.
“Take that pacifier out of your mouth and say it right!” Phillip whispered.
“Good night!” Joey said and stuffed it back in.
Tom lay down but he didn't think he was going to go to sleep.
And link to Chapter One http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4303113
_____Chapter Two_____
He awoke again and this time he was laying on his back staring into white lights. He could feel the cold steel pressing into his back and straps everywhere to bind him down. But even though he could hear people talking...he couldn't understand them.
Then a large face appeared above his own and he jumped. The figure laughed inside his helmet saying something to his colleges. He lifted a needle that looked to be around seven inches long and held it up for Tom to see.
Then he felt it slammed into his neck. A burning sensation shot through his neck like a shock-wave. He yelled out but found he was muzzled again and couldn't scream. The pain was blinding but still more were now being injected everywhere. His legs and his arms and his chest. His lower regions were being stabbed now. Tears leaked out as he just tried to relax as the burning spread through his body trying to remember where he was last.
________
Tom was leaving the house now, heading to a friends house first and then over to the recruiting station. About five others were going to sign up for for the Army as well. It was only a few blocks away till he was at Mark's house.
He ran out to meet him and they shook hands.
“Nice to see you again Tom.” Mark said smiling. “Are you ready to go and kick some ass?”
“You know they're not going to ship us out right away Mark.” Tom said as they walked to Mark's car. “They are going to put us through training and all sorts of other stuff.”
“Yes but I like to dream! Which way is it to Megan's?”
“You should know by now.” Tom said smiling.
“Hey! We were both drunk...and it just happened.”
“You go up here at the four way...and take a left.”
_______
He was coming to now. Someone was over him trying to tap his face lightly. Voices were swimming around him and so were the faces. Then he was helped to sit up and he looked around. He was back in the room with the friendly faces of Phillip, Joey, Brian and Pete.
Everyone was smiling and giggling at Tom. He shook his head back to normal and then looked at them. “Why are you all giggling? I just went through a traumatic experience...”
Joey pointed at Tom and he looked down. Wrapped around his waist was a large fluffy white diaper. That was the only thing he had on.
“Ah!”
“Don't worry about it Tom.” Pete said shrugging. “The first time they inject you...you usually don't lose control...but you don't see any toilets in here do you?”
Tom looked around splaying his ears back. There wasn't anything like a toilet in the room. Except for the thing he was sitting in.
Pete came over and sat by him. “It's okay Tom...the first time as I said...is embarrassing...but the next time they do that to you...you most likely won't have any control over your bathroom abilities. Thing is though...you and I have to worry about changing the others...” He smirked. “Not very fun.”
“We're sitting right here!” Joey yelled crossing his arms. “Besides...you've not had the cleanest diapers either!”
Tom was feeling sick to his stomach and gripped it. He didn't want to be changing anyone's diapers, let alone...his own.
“What about privacy? We don't get that to change?”
“We're all boys.” Phillip said looking up. “All got the same bits. Once a day they bring in a pale for the older cubs and for us. To change. Then they give us food and something to drink. But otherwise we stay in here.”
“Why do they wear those suites though?”
“Well...I think that we have some sort of excess drifting off us...kind of like radiation. But not. If they get exposed to it...they might start to get younger too. And they don't want that.” Pete said bringing his knees to his chest and sighing.
“What about sleep?”
“In here. Everyone sleeps and does everything in this room.” Phillip said again. “Only thing we don't do in here is the experiments. But I think Joey and myself...are pretty much done for testing. We're growing younger on our own now. He's around five now...and I'm...”
He paused trying to think looking at himself. “Um...I am....four I think? Anyway the point is they're goal is to get you to regress on your own...and I've been regressing the past day or so on my own. They just like to do small tests on us to make sure we haven't stopped regressing or haven't started growing.”
“What about-”
“The smell?” Joey cut in grinning. Apparently nothing they were talking about bothered him. Or perhaps it did but he was just the kind of person to try and look on the bright side. He pointed up at the padded walls. “They have a special material...that draws our stenches away from the room. Don't know how it works.”
Someone banged on the door and the lights above them went out. “Lights out!” a rough voice said. They walked away.
“They expect us to sleep?” Tom asked looking at the door.
“Yes...if we don't sleep...or rest...they punish us.” Pete said laying down on the soft material.
Joey leaned over grabbing something and stuffed it into his mouth and then laid down looking up at the ceiling. He mumbled something.
“Take that pacifier out of your mouth and say it right!” Phillip whispered.
“Good night!” Joey said and stuffed it back in.
Tom lay down but he didn't think he was going to go to sleep.
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doing a very good job. :3 you're a wonderful writer! though, i'd like to offer a small suggestion, if it's okay... when Pete "smirks" in the story, i think you should either add the word "wryly" afterwards.. or trade the "smirk" for a "grimace". Otherwise, you've done a great job and I look forward to the rest of this story.
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