Alice's Restaurant
by Dustmeat
Traditional Artist
20 years ago
When I posted this to Yerf, the forums gave me a critique. They said the bunny gets an A but the background gets a C! Well I tried.
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Awesome work as always
I think this is awesome. I clicked it not knowing who drew it because I'm such a huge fan of Arlo Guthrie. Hehe.
I particularly like the table. The detail is awesome, such as the torn "pink" sugar substitute packet.
As for the bunny, the upper body looks great. She has that look that tells you she is a saucy kind of gal and doesn't take crap from anyone. Hips are a bit small for me, but that is a personal taste in woman more than anything. Artistically, her legs do look a little uneven.
Overall I think it is great and I love the coloring, shading and texturing you did.
Oh well! I like it since it reminds me of a CERTAIN SONG.
other than that ive loved the picture as it reminds me of the attitude my mom had as a truckstop waitress thank you!! for sucha cool reminder
So the pattern is wallpaper up to the waist and knotty pine up from that. It makes sense. A shadow on the wall that fell evenly on both would have been effective. Coat hangers and coat would have been a good touch, and also would have shown the two surfaces were one. Maybe your critics just didn't like knotty pine.
but the background is kinda dull........I remember this fast food outlet in eygpt that still had posters of elvis or marilyn monroe on the walls
and then in my homeland singapore.........there is a movie cinema that has a huge mural of old movies and filmstars painted on the wall near the ceiling......and there are old movie posters on the walls..........
what I'm trying to say is........to put some decoration when you post stuff to Yerf.