When I posted this to Yerf, the forums gave me a critique. They said the bunny gets an A but the background gets a C! Well I tried.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 483 x 639px
File Size 116.5 kB
A *C*? I showed this to my mate and he said, "Megan Giles?? Isn't she better than 90% of the artists on Yerf?" This is why I don't browse Yerf. :P
I think this is awesome. I clicked it not knowing who drew it because I'm such a huge fan of Arlo Guthrie. Hehe.
I particularly like the table. The detail is awesome, such as the torn "pink" sugar substitute packet.
I think this is awesome. I clicked it not knowing who drew it because I'm such a huge fan of Arlo Guthrie. Hehe.
I particularly like the table. The detail is awesome, such as the torn "pink" sugar substitute packet.
That background deserves at least a B. It is a little dull and plain, but it adds to the whole atmosphere of a casual diner. Not like anything real fancy was needed, at the most you could have added a window and scenery. But background are not easy, I know many talented artists that outright refuse to draw backgrounds.
As for the bunny, the upper body looks great. She has that look that tells you she is a saucy kind of gal and doesn't take crap from anyone. Hips are a bit small for me, but that is a personal taste in woman more than anything. Artistically, her legs do look a little uneven.
Overall I think it is great and I love the coloring, shading and texturing you did.
As for the bunny, the upper body looks great. She has that look that tells you she is a saucy kind of gal and doesn't take crap from anyone. Hips are a bit small for me, but that is a personal taste in woman more than anything. Artistically, her legs do look a little uneven.
Overall I think it is great and I love the coloring, shading and texturing you did.
seeing the other comments and havin eaten in several of simaler places since i was 8 (mom drove truck then) id have to say the only thing to add to a wall would be pictures of like old cars a peterbelt or KW truck maybe an old coke sign
other than that ive loved the picture as it reminds me of the attitude my mom had as a truckstop waitress thank you!! for sucha cool reminder
other than that ive loved the picture as it reminds me of the attitude my mom had as a truckstop waitress thank you!! for sucha cool reminder
I KNEW THAT! (Heh, heh, okay maybe I didn't.)
So the pattern is wallpaper up to the waist and knotty pine up from that. It makes sense. A shadow on the wall that fell evenly on both would have been effective. Coat hangers and coat would have been a good touch, and also would have shown the two surfaces were one. Maybe your critics just didn't like knotty pine.
So the pattern is wallpaper up to the waist and knotty pine up from that. It makes sense. A shadow on the wall that fell evenly on both would have been effective. Coat hangers and coat would have been a good touch, and also would have shown the two surfaces were one. Maybe your critics just didn't like knotty pine.
the bunny gets an "A".....for obvious reasons....he he he........
but the background is kinda dull........I remember this fast food outlet in eygpt that still had posters of elvis or marilyn monroe on the walls
and then in my homeland singapore.........there is a movie cinema that has a huge mural of old movies and filmstars painted on the wall near the ceiling......and there are old movie posters on the walls..........
what I'm trying to say is........to put some decoration when you post stuff to Yerf.
but the background is kinda dull........I remember this fast food outlet in eygpt that still had posters of elvis or marilyn monroe on the walls
and then in my homeland singapore.........there is a movie cinema that has a huge mural of old movies and filmstars painted on the wall near the ceiling......and there are old movie posters on the walls..........
what I'm trying to say is........to put some decoration when you post stuff to Yerf.
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