cant tell much difference, but it is still good, it still seems when the voice says "common" that it kinda throws it off a bit, cant exactly pinpoint it but it might be fixed if you turned down the distotion on it. note though that i am an artist, not a musician so if you like it that way then its great

Hm...I felt that it needed a little distraction from the basic beat.

I noticed the distortion levels too. It plays fine on my player.
But when I upload it to sites it the distortion gets a little fuzzy.
(Especially around 1:00)

So I'll see what it sounds like without as much vocals.

I think this has worked out quite well, decent progression, great use of synths and an unusual percussion line. The voice sample makes it a little less repetitive than it could've been, and I get the impression this is one of those tracks that could grow on you if you listened to it enough times. Reminiscent of the music in games such as Wipeout, F-Zero and Powerdrome. Great work, good luck with the rest. :)

Thankies.
I think It needs a tad bit cleaning up
and a good fusion of the different percussion
lines. Seems a bit 'jointed' if I say so myself.

It's always a good sign to find an artist that is aware of any shortcomings they make. I look forward to hearing the final version of this, do what you do best. :)