well well, that was quite good, you should continue it.

I've got some ideas for a continuation. I'm going to get a few chapters of my new book done before I get to work on it, however...I need to ration out my workload :)

But glad to hear you enjoyed it (glad to hear someone reads these things, lol)

yeah that sounds great.

i know what you mean, us writers are usually over looked (i think). as a writer myself i know that feeling all to well, you post something and it hardly gets any views, unless it is about......... but we writers don't just write to appeal to people, it is a way for us to release our soul in way. for us the mind is our canvas and the words are our brush. the other thing is people often forget that writing is a form of art. thing with drawn art is that people look at it then they just head off to another painting,maybe 1 minute or two looking at the art, and is soon forgotten. a piece of writing on the other hand holds someones interest for so much longer, so in turn it stay in their mind longer and more likely to return to read it again. We are the story tellers of today, and the future to come. so good luck my fellow writer, may your pencil stay sharp, your pen never dry, and your mind keeps dreaming up new things.

I love stories with embedded images. This was pretty great. Keep up the good work!

That was a great story and nice way to read the story with the transformation pictures. It was definitely a great change of pace from the usual TFs of victim turning into an animal or anthro and have no chance of changing back, with this way there may be one, great job.

I enjoyed this story, I agree with the others.

The way you organized the pages goes a long way. I will read this one for a while

:)

I like this.

I'm sure I'll think of a more useful comment later when it's too late to change this one, but I like this. :3

A wonderful little tail and the art was fantastic icing on the cake. Of course I adore husky TFs. Keep up the wonderful stories. :3

Wonderful story.

It made me think of a sequel. Let me show you what I thought of.

The company's guy finally come to their home. He recognise the changes that happened and tell our two heroines the transformation need to be physically (and/or mentally, it depend of how you want to end it, see below) completed before being reversed. He thus give them a concentrated sample of the shampoo to make her wholly husky, and another device - let's say a spray- to make her human again and then left, implying in his comments the company is on the verge of collapsing because of trials related to cases like this.

The two girls go to the bathroom, leaving the spray behind for later, and not letting the dog in as to be sure he pose no problem again.

The stuff work, making her either physically dog, unable to speak but retaining her mind or simply a full dog without any human mind's left, depending how you want it.

The girl thus reopen the door to the main room to give her the medecine as to make her human again, and end up face to face with a naked man in "err, hello master" style.
The story then go back "a few moments before" and show us the dog accidentally splashing the medecine on him, and his transformation to human.

Back to present: there's no spray left. the two call the company, but the number end to an automatic message telling the company no longer exist.

The male's beautiful, the girl end up dating him, and they keep trisha as their husky. Good ending, more or less depending of trisha keeping her mind or not.


Alternate script : the girl end up accidentally - be it slipping on soap or whatever- splashing the dog stuff on her too. The two husky girls search for the medecine. Same human hunter tf.
More or less good ending whether everyone eventually become humans after some adventure to get the antidote, or if the company go bankrupt here too or hunter just choose to keep them as dogs because he fear they will make him one again -or because he's evil-. And it end up with him human keeping two female husky.



Plenty of possibility here.


Have a good day


(escuse my english)

i love the story and im trying to get in to writing would it be out of the question to kinda make a fan made sequel? feel free to say no

Go for it! I'm currently involved in a lot of other writing projects and this is really far on the back-burner. It'd be cool to see someone else working on it. Glad to hear that you liked it.

Thanks so much ill be sure to give credit