that was just fantastic... and I mean it!

*hugs...

V.

Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it. This was a labor of love. It is rewarding to have it be so warmly received.

*hugs back*

*smiles very big...

good is good silly...

V.

......i am going to draw this......






....all of it.....

If you didn't I was going to, it's a great story

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it, even if TF isn't your usual fare. I made an effort to appeal to a more general audience.

most welcome, it was a very nice story with a edge of sexyness ^_^

....izzn't it though......

*Le`~Sigh*

*giggles*

I would be honored. Thank you for the read!

.....thank you for that smile, love....(/^.^\)........

Well that was a pretty neat story. Very cute, especially the end.

Thank you! I actually fought with the ending for quite awhile. I was not sure whether it was too over the top. I finally decided that I liked it regardless and left it as is.

That was a great story, now you have me all eager for more.

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the read!

I have a seed for another story in this universe. I will have to tend to it, and we can see what grows. ^^

Oh that is just beautiful. I wish I had written it.

Z.

Thank you for your kind words.

This story universe was created with the intention of being a shared setting. I plan on putting up some formal guidelines at some point, but if you are interested in writing in it I can send you the rough outline I have. Just PM me. ^^

That might be fun.

Z

Very nice, and no, I don’t think you went over the top.
You stopped it at a good point – with an option to make it continue if you like.

Thank you.

I didn't have a sequel in mind when I wrote it, at least consciously. Maybe my muse has other ideas though. ; )

Awesome. very well written and a good reflection of your skill as an author. maybe this is just the beginning? btw, cocoa is bad for canines :P

I appreciate the kind words. I do have plans for other stories in this world, and people have asked about a sequel, we shall see. I'm sure she knows cocoa is bad for her, but she is more than half human. When have we ever been good about not doing things that are bad for us? ^^

hah, good point ;P! will be checking for more installments

Now, I like TF stories and all, but this one... well, for me, this struck a really powerful chord. Beautiful, tasteful, perhaps heartfelt - I'm having a hard time finding adequate words that do this story justice. Guess that's why I draw and don't write! Suffice to say, it's something I intend to read again and again :)

Wow, thank you so much! I could not ask for a better reception.

I usually say the same thing about art. *holds up scribbles* "...and this is why I write."

Cheers!

-M

I've never been big on transformation stories, but I really liked this one. The angle was different, in that the character wasn't happy about her change, and I liked how it was caused through sexual transmission like an STD. Plus you had very intriguing characters, so kudos to you on that.

Thank you, I am honored that you enjoyed the story.

I just heard the podcast of your story and I think it's very well done. I do hope you will add to this story.

Femm

Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It has been far too long since I've visited this universe, perhaps I will dust off the old inkpot and dive back in.

You are welcome. I think you should at least give it a try.

femm

I quite like your attention to descriptive detail and the well-expressed psychology of your characters. I do think the story progresses a tad too fast on the dialogue, but on the other hand my dialogue tends to be criticized for being on the slower side (dialogue is also my weakest area in writing), so take that with a grain of salt. I want to also say the opening scene was beautifully constructed-- the point of view is directed exactly where it needs to go and is kept narrow enough that the action feels grounded even when you haven't established the setting or character appearance much yet.

Very nice, overall. Thank you for posting this :D Now I'm gonna start going after you to write more :P