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Seriously proud of this piece. I used a reference piece from Winry Rockbell. The pose was just perfect n Good lord I love the face.
something I didnt say on the previous submission Comments are not only welcome but NEEDED!!!
Guys im new at this. I need guidance and help.
something I didnt say on the previous submission Comments are not only welcome but NEEDED!!!
Guys im new at this. I need guidance and help.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Lion
Size 481 x 833px
File Size 68.7 kB
It's nice, and shows talent. ^^
Areas that could use some touch up, the open eye looks a bit off, I think there is a extra line under it making it look strange. The right arm is more deflated then the left one, and hands (I know there a pain) are a bit off.
At this point I would suggest working more on anatomy. Drawing from other art is OK for learning, but it can be a crutch if you do it too much. I like using free use photos and live models when I can. That said I was told in school that the line between homage and stealing was depended on how much it was changed from the original. I was told as long as 25% was altered from the source, it's fine (Personally I think that's still a bit shady). Personally I try to just use a single aspect, (like the pose, or the hair, ect) from each reference I use and make up as much as possible.
Good luck and I look forward to seeing more of your original work!
ps Also let me know if this sounded harsh, I always hate doing critique in class and I always worry that I'm going into nagging/picky mode rather then helpful mode.
Areas that could use some touch up, the open eye looks a bit off, I think there is a extra line under it making it look strange. The right arm is more deflated then the left one, and hands (I know there a pain) are a bit off.
At this point I would suggest working more on anatomy. Drawing from other art is OK for learning, but it can be a crutch if you do it too much. I like using free use photos and live models when I can. That said I was told in school that the line between homage and stealing was depended on how much it was changed from the original. I was told as long as 25% was altered from the source, it's fine (Personally I think that's still a bit shady). Personally I try to just use a single aspect, (like the pose, or the hair, ect) from each reference I use and make up as much as possible.
Good luck and I look forward to seeing more of your original work!
ps Also let me know if this sounded harsh, I always hate doing critique in class and I always worry that I'm going into nagging/picky mode rather then helpful mode.
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